Again not bad. At this stage there does not appear to be any sign of the bad boy image that Tom will develope later. You still have my interest. Please update soon. Again 10/10. MERRY CHRISTMASAuthor's Response: I will update as soon as I can, I'm glad you still like. ;) it's true that Tom doesn't show any bad boy signs yet, but that will change soon. Thanks for your review, and Merry Christmas. Report Review
Hey I like this so far... I can't wait to find out more!
leanneAuthor's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you like it. Report Review
Still a good story so far. It will be very interesting to follow Toms route through school. 10/10.Author's Response: thanks for your review, I'm glad you like it and I hope to get more done soon. Report Review
So far I like it. For an Eleven year old he knew what he was doing. 10/10.Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Report Review
hey its good. Continue i want to learn more but dont leave such big gaps between your sentences.
Sirusly stop it!!Author's Response: sorry, the site did that, not me. lol. and I will be adding more soon, glad you like it. Report Review
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