he is such a man whore! straight from when i read the line - i've met someone else, i smiled and thought "THIS IS GONNA BE AWESOME!" and so it was, you did a real good job of the characters, i really hated draco (dont know if that was your intension) i think its because i like the character Pansy and it seemed like he would just make it worse- we're thinking of eloping, but then I met Astoria and I realised, And I love Astoria i could just imagine Pansy going and ripping his pretty little head off XD i thought it was awesome though seriously *favourite story*
daisychain1Author's Response: Hah! Lol, ta. Glad you liked it so much. I intended this to be sort of lighthearted and funny, I'm glad you picked up on that. Draco did seem to just keep saying the wrong thing, right? I'm so glad you liked it! Report Review
AngelofDoe from the forums here to drop you a review.
This is a nicely written story and I like how you've descibed the physical symptoms of the emotions Pansy is going through, rather than the mental symptoms. This helps to bring the reader towards Draco's side of the situation and look at it from his POV.
Even though Draco has cheated on Pansy, you've written this in a way where the reader doesn't immediately jump to Pansy's side and start incriminating Draco.
I also like how it's all just interaction between Draco and Pansy and Astoria is only mentioned. This helps reader to focus on this situation rather than on two different situtations (that can sometimes lead a one shot down the wrong path).
Lollie :DAuthor's Response: Thanks! I've never really written about any of the Trio era characters before, and I thought I'd really struggle to write Draco because I've never liked him, but I actually found this really fun to write!
I'm glad you liked it.
Thanks for revewing! Report Review
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