Reading Reviews for Boats and Birds
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Review #1, by Desolation Chapter One: Roses

10th November 2010:
I think this story has an interesting start; but we don't really know what direction it's taking. I think the grammar and spelling were pretty much flawless, except towards the end of the chapter, when Sirius says "Hey James, didja here that?" The only thing I noticed was you need to change 'here' to 'hear'. Otherwise, great start, I'll be back to read more(:


Author's Response: Thank you, it's really good to know that and I'll fix that mistake :) I know it's quite vague and I'm honestly sorry about that, but I hope it won't be too bad by the next chapter. But thank you for reviewing and pointing out that- I'd re-read through a couple of times but I was bound to miss something haha. It really means a lot to me.

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