Ha ha I love this story!please update soon...

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PLEASE UPDATE!

C'MON! It's been practically forever and I'm DYING HERE :(

Please, pretty please update?

Please?

Author's Response: I know, I'm so sorry, it HAS been a while. I'm working on the next chapter though so hopefully it should be done sometime soon.

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I really like this story! It's an interesting take on the Lily/James story :) Please update soon!

Author's Response: The story line isn't completely correct with what we know about Lily and James from the books, but the idea was so interesting I just had to write it. :) I'm glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing.

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i loved this first chapter!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks so much! I'm glad your enjoying it so far.

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The secrecy is hurting my brain, even though I know what the Order is. She's so uninformed...blah.

BlAhAhAhAhAhAh...

Okay. Done.

Author's Response: Is she too uninformed? I know she doesn't know anything about the Order, but everything has just started progressing. Anyway, thanks for reviewing! :)

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I don't think your plot line is moving to fast. You've definitely established the tone and setting and it's interesting to see Lily so starved for excitement, even if the only way she can achieve it is through James. There were some lines in this chapter that made me chuckle. The bit "try fighting for the rights of a stereotypical muggle cubicle worker" was pretty good. Hoping you'll post more soon. Good story so far.

Author's Response: I know, I tried to find a good balance between developing the plot too fast and dragging stuff on, and so I'm glad you think I found a fair amount of both. Lily is starved for excitement--that's why her encounters with James are so much fun to write. :) And, I hope, just as fun to read. I'm glad you like it so far and thanks for your review!

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I like Lily's snappy internal retorts to her work situation. Good job.

Author's Response: I'm trying to keep her internal retorts at the right amount, and it's nice to see that you like them. Thanks for your review!

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This was quite witty. I liked Lily's internal dialogue and the interaction between her and James. On to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you're liking how I'm portraying Lily. Anyway, thanks again. :)

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Another Great Chapter ... :)


JilyRonks x

Author's Response: Aww, I'm happy you liked it. Thanks for your review! :)

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That's not fair. Really. I mean, a cliffhanger? That's really, really below the belt.

-is totally not talking to you anymore-

(but I did love it, loads!)

Author's Response: Haha, sorry about that, I just couldn't resist throwing one in. Glad you liked it. :D

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More!!! This is really good:)

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

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Ooooh this is a really interesting plot - I like it a lot. Hope you keep writing.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it--and yeah, the plot is picking up a bit. Thanks for your review! :)

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Cute story! Can't wait to see what happens next

Author's Response: Glad you like it so far. :D I'll try to update as soon as possible!

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love it so far please update soon

Author's Response: I'm working on the next chapter, and I'll try to have that out as soon as possible. Anyway, I'm glad you like it so far. :) Thanks for the review!

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This is very cute, and VERY funny. Please update!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I'm glad you like it, and I'm already working on the next chapter. :) Thanks again!

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You're doing really well! You know what I would be devoutly thankful for?

Lily/James interaction.

I love them together, and so now I'm sort of dying on the inside.

Author's Response: I love them together too--don't worry, they'll have plenty of scenes. :D
Anyway, thanks for the review!

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OMG...it isn't canon.

Duh.

Duh.

DUH.

Oh, well. It's bloody hilarious, and so I'll have to let this one slide :)

Author's Response: Aww, thanks for your review! Glad you like it so far. :)

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I'm liking it :)
Just get James and Lily together ! :D


JilyRonks x

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! James and Lily might not get together for a while, but they'll have plenty of interactions. :)

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This is a really interesting story! I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review! :) I'll try to update soon--I'm working on it. Again, thanks!

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Cool. But it seems like James doesn't like Lily here. Anyway, it's still a cool story so keep it up!!! have the next chapter Very SOON!!!-x.

Author's Response: James and Lily--well, they fight a lot (in this story), but I'll try to define their relationship more in later chapters. Anyway, thanks so much for the review! :)

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