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5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Apollonia Ice Cream, Quidditch, Fireworks and Pets

30th January 2011:
Too straight forward make Elle a little bit more mean

Author's Response: It's not really in her nature to be mean but... Well, you'll see. (If you continue reading, I hope you do.)

But don't worry, the story is just beginning. I'm not sure if you've read the rest yet, since you reviewed the first chapter, but after that, it becomes different.

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Review #2, by Smile :) No Words, No Greetings, No Smiles

30th January 2011:
I love your story!!! Elle is cool, and I love how you made her realistic by being brainwashed by her parents and choosing her other friends over Sirius. And being placed in Slytherin. I was confused for a second when you said Evan was bulling Peter, but then I realized you meant Rosier not Lily. Whoops :) This is a really really good story and I will be waiting for the next chapter! I want to see what Elle grows up to be like!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! And thanks for the wonderful comments, you made my day.

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Review #3, by Janie_Ophelia The Train, The Hat

13th January 2011:
I love it! Write more please!

Author's Response: Thanks! Things are busy here so I'm not sure if I have time to do so, but I will soon! Hopefully by the end of this week. (hopefully...)

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Review #4, by GirlMarauderAlly The Train, The Hat

22nd December 2010:
cool story. i really liked it... review mine?

Author's Response: Thanks!
Sure why not? :)

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Review #5, by SmileyChabbit Ice Cream, Quidditch, Fireworks and Pets

13th November 2010:
great start, keep going cuz you got me interested.^_^

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm writing the next chapters already, I already thought of the plot and all. But then I have school work and exams are coming up so it might take a while. Thanks again! -Diamonds

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