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Review #1, by princessrapunzel Four Things Harry Never Said (and One He Did)

28th April 2011:
Harry/Hermione will always be, regardless of what the books supposedly dictate, my one true pair. Hands down. There's no competition.

Ahh, where to begin with this? Well, first off. I really love that you didn't have them get together whilst they were at school, that you stayed true to the books in the sense that Hermione married Ron, and Harry married Ginny - and even that Luna had sons called Lorcan and Lysander. I liked that you included that too. It's not often that people do that, making them stick to what the books said (in a sense), and that you did is what makes this so much better. More realistic in a way, if that makes any sense whatsoever.

Thinking back, I actually think that I have read this before, but for some reason never left a review - which I'm so sorry about. I always try to leave reviews for fics that I love. Which is how I feel about this, obviously. Maybe I was being annoyingly lazy that day, or something.

I don't have much more left to say other than I think that the last paragraph is beautiful, and puts it all together so well. 'But, in the end, the most important thing that Harry said was the one thing he didn't need to say, because Hermione already knew.' I love that. I love that Hermione already knew how he felt because that's what Hermione does, isn't it? Haha. Hermione knows everything about everyone, that's why her hair is so big. It's full of secrets. I didn't expect a Mean Girls line to appear in this, but hey, what's life without surprises? Oh my god, I am so lame it hurts. Please don't think I am some sort of hatter. I am actually quite normal from time to time ;)

Right well, I need to stop or - well, I'll say too much. Not that I haven't already. I just thought you'd like to know, not that you probably don't already, that this is absolutely wonderful and you have captured the characters so well. I love that you included actual scenes from the books - like when she touches his hair outside of the tent, I remember reading that and wishing he had had the same thoughts along the lines of what you wrote.

I love the title by the way.

Allie x.

Author's Response: Aww, you are so kind! I'm so happy that you enjoyed this story! I also love that Mean Girls quote, by the way. :)

Thank you for reading, and for reviewing, too!


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Review #2, by D Four Things Harry Never Said (and One He Did)

20th April 2011:
Wow!! Liked it!! Loved it!!...If only Harry had really said those words in the books!...I kinda have always wondered why Harry as a boy never once thought of Hermione as someone more than just a platonic friend.Would have liked it if JKR had atleast explored that a bit.well me and my rambling self.But still loved your fic!!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading - I'm so glad that you liked it! :D

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Review #3, by D Four Things Harry Never Said (and One He Did)

20th April 2011:
Wow!! Liked it!! Loved it!!...If only Harry had really said those words in the books!...I kinda have always wondered why Harry as a boy never once thought of Hermione as someone more than just a platonic friend.Would have liked it if JKR had atleast explored that a bit.well me and my rambling self.But still loved your fic!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! To be honest, I feel that Harry did see Hermione in that light (at least up until the very, very end - and even then, I could see it). It may not have been spelled out in bright, flashing letters that were forced on us (like Harry's "relationship" with Ginny), but I truly think that between the lines, JKR created a wonderful couple. If only she had seen it, too, eh? Anyway, thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

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Review #4, by confusedlover Four Things Harry Never Said (and One He Did)

7th March 2011:
Very lovely.

This was cute and fluffy. Great job!! (:

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

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Review #5, by EpiskeyPM Four Things Harry Never Said (and One He Did)

29th January 2011:
This is the sweetest, most thought-out thing I have ever read. I've always thought that there were so many things Harry never said, and "Thank you" and "I'm sorry" were at the top of them. Very beautiful; you are a great writer.

Author's Response: Oh wow, thank you so much! Your kind words are greatly appreciated. :)

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Review #6, by ev Four Things Harry Never Said (and One He Did)

26th January 2011:
great story!! i hope you write more harry/hermione stories! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :3

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Review #7, by dakota Four Things Harry Never Said (and One He Did)

25th January 2011:
Great. If only the books turned out this way

Author's Response: Ah, but parts of this take place after the "end" of the series. So, I guess, in a way, they did end this way. :P Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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Review #8, by Writersbane1 Four Things Harry Never Said (and One He Did)

22nd January 2011:
Damn! My glucose went up to about 500 reading this. Nicely done!

Author's Response: Lol, thank you so much!

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Review #9, by Miss Haggan Four Things Harry Never Said (and One He Did)

22nd January 2011:
Awk that was sweet.

10/10

Author's Response: Wow, thank you!

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