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Review #1, by charlottetrips BEGINNING

10th November 2010:
I sense that you are not quite the Albus Dumbeldore fan that the rest of us are...also you should just check your writing over one more time due to spelling, capitalization and grammar errors. And is this going to be a one-shot or a whole store unto itself?

Author's Response: yeah i'm not the Dumbledore fan..i think that logically Dumbledore could have done things alternatively than giving adventures to harry and his party..i will tell all my doubts about Dumbledore in a better way in the fiction so keep reading and review..i dont thing it.s going to a oneshot but i will solely focus on making it hot and thrilling..thanks for the review


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