Nice.
-nervoustruth

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normally, i think people have a hard time conveying bellatrix's psychotic personality, they just don't quite get that essence. but i think you got it, and did a wonderful job with it (:

i love the point of view you used

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you mentioned that, because that's exactly one of the reasons I wrote this. Nobody seems to be able to capture that thin line between insanity and madness that Bellatrix is on, so that's what I wanted to try to do(that and I was bored in Spanish-I mean really, who wants to conjugate verbs for a whole hour?) Thanks again!

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wow. This was really interesting and deep, if you look at it from Bellatrix's point of view. Poor child. But must I say, good job!

Author's Response: thanks, that's the type of response I was looking for! I think she's often misportrayed, so I hope I did a good job!

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Wow! Absolutely awesome! I seriously got goosebumps reading this!
Love the end! Perfect! Really, really good! 10/10!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. The whole point of the story was to give the back story of one of the most evil characters in the book. The end was the first thing I wrote actually. Thanks again!

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wow this story is really good
i loved the ending!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! This just struck me one day while I was studying for Spanish. The ending was actually the basis for the entire story

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