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Review #1, by Aidenk77 Ron's Phone Call

3rd November 2010:
I enjoyed this, it was quite short, but I'm really looking forward to reading more. A good start :D

Author's Response: Thankyouu (:
It should pick up in the next few chapters (:

Thanks for the review! xx


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Review #2, by browneyedbrunette Ron's Phone Call

3rd November 2010:
please continue its GREAT !
the spacing thing,
did it tell you you had to double space it? it did that to me as well at first. type it elsewhere then copy paste and it should work out alright. can't wait to keep reading.
however, I don't love the lyrics in between the story. If people know it's about lips of an angel they will get it, maybe leave them out and just make the references in the story stronger?

Author's Response: Thanks, I will (:

Yeah, the spacing was being annoying, when I posted it, it seemed fine, and now it's all weird :S but I'll fix it later, it's not super important right now...

Yeah, I'm only planning to have the lyrics in chapter 2, and that's it for them (:

Thanks for the review xx


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