hello charming grey box, how are you?
Just wanted you to know I absolutely love this story, although, that doesn't even start to describe it lol. I just see your writing so clearly, if that makes sense. Not only are you really telling their story perfectly, but the story of the song as well. it was made for them :)
I love pure fluff :)
great job really!
10/10!Author's Response: thank you so much! Report Review
please write another chapter soon . this story is really good Report Review
Much more developed than the Victoire and Teddy one shot! It is kind of confusing why she's crying, but I think you did an awesome job with the dialogue. Good job! Report Review
Oh my Rowling!! I love this story! :D Report Review
Oh my gosh, that was so sweet :]
I really like this, and I really love the song (I've always wanted someone to do a fic based on it. lol), Please update soon :D Report Review
very cute and well written. well done!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
This story is good, but I expect it to be better. Next time write a bit longer chapter, give some more information. :DAuthor's Response: Don't worry, the older they get, the longer I expect the chapters to be. This was just a supposed to be something sweet and random they'd remember when thinking back on their childhood :) Report Review
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