Pretty cool story, but I think you could make it a bit longer, and set the mood a tiny bit sadder, and more sentimental, after all, its dead people coming back. Isn't that just a little creepy? Anyway, i loved the story.

Author's Response: It was sadder in the beginning, but I was only allowed three quotes, and so the thought behind all the quotes weren't there. And of course it is creepy! Why wouldn't it be, people are coming partly back to life a while. Thank you

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Really well written and quite emotional! I'd love to read other stories about this character!

Author's Response: I looove your name, I was just re-watching the sequel. And thank you. I didn't think about writing more to about Maggie. Now you have given me ideas. Thanks for R+R

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very nice hope you continue writing.

Author's Response: thank you, I am about to write a new story

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good story, very touching.

Author's Response: Thanks, I decided that for once I am going to write about myself, very self centered, huh?

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This is so sweet and lovely :)

JilyRonks x

Author's Response: Thank you, it took me forever trying to get rid of extra quotes because there can only be three.

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That was wonderful! This was a beautiful story, I enjoyed it so much, I believe it was my favourite out of the ones I have read! It was a lovely one-shot.

Author's Response: Thank you! I looked up 'maggie' to see if any story's had my name, but there weren't many so I added this. I am so glad you liked it.

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