7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by ohmymerlin Room of Requirement

9th July 2014:
Hello!

This was such an interesting take on how Fred and George developed Headless Hats! It was definitely a smart idea and it made me laugh! Especially at how scarred Fred was seeing his sort-of-adoptive brother kissing the girl he fancied, haha!

It also made me laugh at how George wanted to make Fred okay with people snogging and then all those posters of the people snogging were up in the common room! That was brilliant! And then I can't believe they sent the Headless Hat to Cho, hahahaha! I don't blame Cho for shrieking when she realised she had no head. That would not be a pleasant experience!

Great one-shot! It was so funny! :D

- Kayla :)

House Cup 2014 review Decree #6

Author's Response: Hi Kay,

Merlin these decrees seem to be the source of reviews for this story. xD But I'm glad you think the humour and dialogue worked. I'm not particularly good with those, so I'm always happy to get reassurance.

Thank you for enjoying it. Keep on for the House Cup!

Love,
Sevvy
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Review #2, by zealousVisionary Room of Requirement

9th July 2014:
House Cup 2014 Review Decree #6

Wow! This fic was just hilarious! I've been reading a lot of more depressing stories on this site, and this really was a breath of fresh air for me.

I think my favorite part of this story was Fred and George as characters. They can be hard characters to write well, but your characterization was simply amazing! I love reading their funny dialog, and I did laugh out loud more than once at this story. Normally, I would suggest that you put more details in the story along with the dialog, but I think in this case, the amount of dialog you have is perfect as it is!

I think that it's just so interesting to read about the products Fred and George create, and you wrote about them so well. Sending Cho the Headless Hat is something I could totally see Fred and George doing!

Anyways, great job- this story was hilarious!

Author's Response: zV, (somehow, in my head, I can hear that as a cool slang for "The 'V'" xD)

Angst is beautiful and comedy is hard. I'm not very confident at attempting them so your reassurance does mean a lot to me. I'm relieved to know you think the characterization worked, as well.

It's been quite a while since I wrote this and rereading it now makes me flinch because it does seem more of a dialogue-based drabble than a story, so I might go back and rewrite it sometime. I'll see what works. Thank you for stopping by to read and review!

Best Regards on the House Cup
Sevvy
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Review #3, by LadyL8 Room of Requirement

7th July 2014:
Hi There.

This one was really funny. I love how you characterized Fred and George. I think they're quite difficult to write, because they are so funny all the time. But you did it amazingly. I love how they tease each other as well, like for example when George says: "You, my brother, has got some serious get-used-to-snogging to do". It's really believable. And I really laughed at that note they left Cho, and then she screamed. It was just a funny story, and I really liked it.

- Lotte

House Cup 2014 Review - The Educational Decree Number 2

Author's Response: LL,

Hi back. Thanks so much for stopping by and leaving a review. I'm glad you thought it was somewhat amusing as humour has never been an easy thing for me to attempt. The characterisation is reassuring,

I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
~ Sevvy
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Review #4, by Liz Room of Requirement

6th August 2011:
Great story. It was cool to see how the twins got their ideas for all of their great products. Really interesting idea. I'd never thought about it before and I'm glad you did.

Author's Response: Liz,

Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate it as much! Thank you. :3

Sevvy

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Review #5, by DemetersChild Room of Requirement

11th November 2010:
Haha, this was really nice! I never really thought about how Fred and George came up with this stuff. I just thought they were geniuses. :P This was really funny and I enjoyed reading it.

One thing I'd like to point out though is that I've always thought of Fred as the more outgoing one while I found George to be a little (teeny tiny bit) more introverted. So, I think that if the two switched places it might fit their characters better. That's just me, though. Fred seemed so weird like this. xD

Another lovely one-shot!

Dem

Author's Response: Demi, (don't ask)

Oooh, you know what? Now, that I think about it, you're right! I was planning on editing this story and when I do, I'll definitely switch their places. It does fit George more, doesn't it? I did feel a bit weird in this story but couldn't seem to put my finger on it. You did it for me, which I truly appreciate.

Thanks again!
Sevvy


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Review #6, by daliha Room of Requirement

7th November 2010:
Fun! Lol.

But seriously this was funny, fun and you portrayed the twins well! :) I loved the idea I'd have never thought about it in a 1,000 years :)

Author's Response: Thanks. That was a very nice thing to say. :) I'm glad you thought I did a good job in portraying the twins. I was a bit worried about that...

~ 'DJSevvy


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Review #7, by MidnightBlue_x Room of Requirement

29th October 2010:
Hehe, Sevvy!
I love this, it's a really great idea and you've written this so well! So thank you for entering my challenge and actually entering a piece (only three people did) so yes THANK YOU!

Love you Sev,

x Ely

Author's Response: Elly,

Really? *dances around in glee* Thank you! I'm glad you like it and I'm glad you took time to read and review!

Thanks!
Sevvy

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