This is sweet little story. I always wondered what Dudley would do if he had a witch or a wizard. She has Lily's eyes - how wonderful! I am glad that Dudley was honest with her in this story about the ugliness of Harry's childhood at his house. I also really like how Lily/Margie looked after her little cousins at Hogwarts. It looks as if you are no longer active on the site but if you visit again I wanted you to know your story is still enjoyed. Thank you for writing and sharing your talent.

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I really liked this pair of stories. The story seems very realistic and I think you captured the characters voices very well. Very nice. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.

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I fell in love with this story! I love how Dursley kept referring to Harry as 'him' and 'the others'. It's so well written, I couldn't picture a better story for the plot line! Only problem is, I wish it was a novel! You should really think about writing one :) 10/10

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EPIC! Nice job, keep up the good work!

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this is great =D Never heard of this kind of take on the Dursley's. Makes them a bit more real and human.

An interesting angle to adventure through and dare I say you did a fine job. I was a bit sad that the families never once mingled at the train station. But they might have been secretive about that as well.

All in all it was loverly!

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Please continue! I want to know if they show up to the wedding lol. It's a great little story, and I could really see that happen. Great Job

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A splendid family oneshot. Is this in FFn? Because I think I;ve seen it before? Clever with the name in my opinion. Marjorie is a delightful character. Maybe you should write a sequel about Harry's reaction to the letter?

Author's Response: lol
yes it was posted in FFnet under my old name.
a friend read it and encouraged my to post it here after i made a few revisions. glad you liked it!

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Awesome one-shot. Your writing makes me feel like this girl really existed, and now I feel so sorry for her. And now I'm sad and teary-eyed for someone that doesn't even exist. CURSE YOU! Anyhow, great writing.

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Despite it being a little bit sad I really enjoyed this. It was unique from other things I have read. I hope you write a companion piece to go with this!!

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I really really enjoyed this! Though, I do wish it went into more detail. Can't wait for the companion piece!!! 10/10

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Aw I really liked that! I've never read anything about Dudley's kids so that was a good way to write it. Man I really want to know what happened after the invitation was sent. But I guess you set it up that way. I really loved that ending. It was just so sweet and...light. Bitter-sweet is what it is. I love bitter-sweet things. Great job!

-castaspell
9/10

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That was incredibly sweet! Could you please, please expand that in a longer story? Or at least post the companion piece quickly? I can't wait to read and know more about what happened to Margie, whether or not she could really call the Potters family.

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I really enjoyed this! It was well written, and just a bit sad. Nice work.

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