It's really gorgeous your very talented you Gould be an author

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Absolutely beautiful is the only way to describe it. The way you wrote his feelings for her was beautiful and their conversations were beautiful. I am very glad you took time to write this.
Keep up the good work!!

padmoonyfoot7: over and out!!

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Aw this was just the kind of fluff I needed! I loved it!

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Aw!! That is so cute and adorable! I want more! hahah, I really love your writing and characters! 10/10

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Sometimes when I get into that stupid teenager "I'M SO BAD AT EVERYTHING I ATTEMPT AND NO ONE WILL EVER LOVE ME OH GOD I'M DYING ALONE" kind of mindset I find my way to this story and I read it and it gives me goosebumps and it motivates me to write and create things a hundred times over, but mostly it makes me smile a really cheesey smile. Especially when I read the Atlas line. It's so, so beautifully written. Thank you for existing.

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Its so damn adorable :O I want my own Teddy...

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Quite lovely. Made me melt:)
Love your stories!

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I.

LOVE IT!

It is the absolute cutest thing I have ever read! I want something like that! GAH lol

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It is so gorgeous and makes me feel sort of wistful and teary. Thanks :)

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Well, an hour, right? I can see that. I mean - I can't believe in it. It's not like fairy tale, more like 'never-can-happen'. Boys are not like girls and in this story Teddy is girlish. He thinks like a girl, he acts like one. Maybe I'm wrong, don't know, but I simply don't see it. It's too sweet, too easy, there's obviously something missing.

It's not like I didn't like it. Well, maybe I didn't, but it's not like I regret that I've read it. I don't. It's neither bad, nor good. You can do better.

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Aww this is so sweet! Epic love story!!! Aw

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awww ♥ this is so adorable and sweet! loved it. and the banner fits the story wonderfully, it's very cute.

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This is the perfect love story. No overpowering conflict that makes you want to scream. No frustrating characters that won't get together, no matter how much you wish they would wisen up. Just two people. Two people that love each other. The perfect love story. Too bad that's not how it works in reality

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This was a very pretty, picturesque story. The words you used were chosen quite well, and they painted the imagery seamlessly. The story flowed from start to finish, evoking all the right emotions, pulling me in so that I became invested in Teddy and Victoire's relationship. I was genuinely beginning to worry that they would not get together in the end, as this is the sort of story where not tying up all the loose ends and giving it anything less than a happy ending would be nothing short of tragic. Teddy loved Victoire for so long, safe in secrecy and endeavoring to hide all turmoil when Victoire floated from one prat to another, that he deserved to have his feelings returned.

Well, done I enjoyed this. 10/10.

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aw i love it! teddy and victoire are so cute! :)

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It was beautiful!! ♥♥♥

No other words for it.. I liked the way you covered their lives since when she was four to when she was nineteen.. :)

Oh and Teddy, he's awesome!! :)

I am not a fan of "happily ever afters".. they are not realistic enough but stories like these give me second thoughts.. :)

Keep writing!!
--
Swati

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LOVE! So dreamy and cute and pretty I could just curl up on this chair and read it all day long.

But then I wouldn't be able to read all your stories.

CHEERS!

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I love Teddy/Victoire. Honestly. I just don't like how people usually portray them. But THE CUTENESS.

I died inside. A bit. In a my-heart-melted-away-so-I-died way, mind you.

( he couldn’t think past his heartbeats, and she was crying. )

That line - a clear example of what I meant before. I literally had to stop reading because my mind was going a thousand miles a second.

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You. Are. Amazing. I love your one shots even more than your novels (didn't know that was POSSIBLE!) and I read them over and over. I think this is the... 5th (?) time I've read this.

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That story was really cute! It made me happy :)

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aweee!!! that was cute!!! a clueless teddy is adorable!! : ) im glad that lady was there to set him right!!

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oh i

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Aww, that was soo cute.

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i read this story and i loved it! i mean it doesnt have any back ground information or anything, its just a couple of moments in their past childhood, but it really fit together well. i really loved it.

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beautiful. gives me HOPE.

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