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Review #1, by Kandy The Others

6th June 2011:
Please update, this is a really good story that I love and want to see the end of. True authors never give up! Stick with it and you will be happy with the results. (As will many of your readers!)

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Review #2, by Essence and Lace XOXO The Others

25th January 2011:
Oh my god you are awesome! I love love love this story! It makes me feel almost like I'm reading a new HP book. I can't wait for the next chapters. When this chapter ended I just staired off into a blank space for ten minutes. Arrgg! Your gonna kill me with these cliffhangers! Please put in more chapters soon. You are an AWESOME writer by the way. I can't wait for your first book to hit bookstores. I'll always be a fan! Lol :P

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Review #3, by Savannah Frey The Others

9th January 2011:
Love it and really want to read more! :)

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Review #4, by MrsJaydeMalfoy The Others

1st January 2011:
Great chapter. Hoping for more soon.

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Review #5, by Alexandria The Others

30th December 2010:
I loved your story and can't wait to here the rest. Keep up the good work! :)

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Review #6, by JamesPotterSeries The Others

28th December 2010:
GREAT STORY KEEP WRITING there is just one minor flaw. Narcissa never actually was a death eater, oddly. But, you were smart to remember it was a burn because for some reason the movies made it more like a tatoo.

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Review #7, by CharlotteD The Others

22nd December 2010:
I know it's the holidays, but please please keep writing!
Happy Christmas!

Author's Response: Thanks! Merry Xmas to you too. :) I've actually been quite sick, but I'll turn in another chapter right now. :)

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Review #8, by Bellatrix 15101 The Others

22nd December 2010:
Excellent story, I love it!

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much for taking the time to read this! I really, REALLY appreciate it. :D

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Review #9, by Siriuslover177 The Others

21st December 2010:
I feel so bad for Cissy.
Having to become a Death Eater.
Amazing chapter!
Can't wait tell the next one!


Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading! I think it would be awful to be forced to become a Death Eater, don't you? =/

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Review #10, by _Malf0y_L0Ver_ The Others

20th December 2010:
I loved it, bla bla bla the usual XD Can't wait to read how she slaps Lucius xD

I'm so sorry you haven't heard from me in a while, but I really have been very busy :S I'm really really sorry!

Author's Response: Hehe, glad you can't wait to read about her slapping Lucius. :P That shall be interesting! It's okay, I've been busy too and sick. I haven't even been on here for like 5 days. :(

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Review #11, by Meagan The Others

20th December 2010:
I love the story the details are good as is the grammar but it would be nice for cissy and Lucius to finally have a talk.also since your story was really good I was wondering if you knew other stories that you would recommend please and thank you please update another chapter it's a nice read

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words! I really appreciate you reading this. Well, I don't read a lot, but I'd recommend Mrs.JaydeMalfoy's story. It's really good! I'd link you, but I guess we can't post links here...

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Review #12, by Siriuslover177 Sisters

18th December 2010:
She got pregnant!
Wow! Did not suspect that...
Amazing chapter. :D


Author's Response: Thanks so much! I tried to make it rather unexpected, you know? lol Thanks for reading! :)

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Review #13, by _Malf0y_L0Ver_ Sisters

16th December 2010:
Aaarhg! i want to know what happens next!
As usual I loved this chapter XD you know I'm in love with your story right?
I will reply fully to you on Leaky when I find enough time to write a good and long reply :P


Author's Response: Yay, I'm so glad you loved the chapter! *cheers* I'm so glad you're reading this. :D Okay, I hope you get lots of time so I can talk to you on Leaky soon. But hey, at least Xmas break is coming up, right? :)

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Review #14, by MrsJaydeMalfoy Sisters

14th December 2010:
WHAT??!?!?! *Stares agape at the last two lines* That's really the end?!? You're going to KILL me with these cliffhangers! But really, it was a GREAT chapter!! I loved it, as usual! I NEED an update SOON!!

Author's Response: LOL, yes that is all you get for now. :P I'm so sorry about killing you with those cliffhangers! You better not die though, okay? Draco needs you! Thanks for saying you liked the chapter. :)

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Review #15, by jynx Falling

13th December 2010:
Walden's a little possesive!
I really like how your stories progressing, but I feel that you've kinda made their maturity all the same, like 5th year. S'ok tho.

10/10! More plz!

Author's Response: Yup, I'd definitely say that Walden is a bit on the possessive side! lol Thanks for saying that you like how it's progressing. :) You're right, they are a bit mature. :P Thanks for the review!

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Review #16, by MrsJaydeMalfoy Falling

10th December 2010:
Aw.. I wish they would get together already! :-( That was really mean what Lucius said about her! But Walden DOES need to relax! And Nott already seems like he's going to be a trouble-maker! Great chapter, can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: I know! It was kind of hard to write this part. :P But I agree! Walden is like WAY too possessive. I definitely think Nott likes to cause trouble. hehe Thanks so much for your review! :)

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Review #17, by Siriuslover177 Falling

9th December 2010:
My god!
I can't believe it!
Lucius is SO mean!
And with Walden wow!
He is SO cute. :D
Loved it!


Author's Response: Yes, Lucius is really mean to poor Cissy! But yeah, Walden is quite cute right now even if he is a little overboard. :P Thanks so much for reading for me! :)

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Review #18, by CharlotteD Falling

8th December 2010:
This is going to sound catastrophically lame, but I've been checking for this chapter religiously for the past week...and now I can sleep easy. Keep going!

Author's Response: Lol, it does not sound lame and I'm so glad you've been checking for my chapter! :D It's such a great compliment. Glad you liked it! :)

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Review #19, by _Malf0y_L0Ver_ Falling

8th December 2010:
Ooow :( I feel so bad for cissy!
Lucius is really mean to her :O
Well i loved the chapter! xD so like I always say keep on the good work :P


Author's Response: I feel bad for poor Cissy too! Lucius can be really mean if he wants to. =/ Thanks so much for reviewing for me! :D

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Review #20, by TaamBlack Heart of Black

7th December 2010:
your story has really grown
& it just keeps getting better & better'
cant wait for you to update more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! That's such a wonderful compliment. I love it when people say stuff like that! Thanks again. ;)

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Review #21, by TaamBlack Dark Angel

7th December 2010:
another amazinngg chapterr

Author's Response: Yay, so glad you liked it! Thanks for taking the time to read it. :)

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Review #22, by TaamBlack Spellbinder

7th December 2010:
this chapter was great
your story is really coming along.

Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much! I LOVE your reviews. They mean a lot. :)

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Review #23, by TaamBlack Sleepwalker

7th December 2010:
ah clifeee!
& poor Cissy. gah stupid Natasha

Author's Response: Teehee, I love cliffies! :) Thanks for reading!

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Review #24, by _Malf0y_L0Ver_ Heart of Black

5th December 2010:
I love it so much!
Keep on the good work :D
You know I adore your story :p
Can't wait to read more !

Author's Response: Yay, so glad you liked it! Lol, I just send you a letter on Leaky asking if you would read this. :P But I guess you already did! :D Thanks so much for the nice review.

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Review #25, by jynx Heart of Black

5th December 2010:
Oooh! Plot thickener! So everyone is about the same year. I never thought of Molly as being the Lucius-fawning type, kudos for being unique!
Natasha's revenge hasn't been fufilled yet, so don't forget about her!

Author's Response: Yay for plot thickener! :) Yup, everyone is about in the same year. I decided that it would add a bit to the story if Molly liked Lucius. lol
Don't worry; Nat will be in the story a lot more!
I have a chapter in for validation, so more soon! Thanks again for reading. :D

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