This is an amazing story. Please update soon! Report Review
Oh oh oh, i hope you update soon!! xD Report Review
I'm already in love with this! :) I love the last bit the best. After James comes. 10/10.Author's Response: AAAH; 10/10? This just made my day ^_^ Thank you! Report Review
Okay I honestly just saw this. The captains name is oak wood? As in like and oak tree which is made of wood. Hahahah oh that is funny. Um... Yeah I loved the scene at the very end the humor is great Report Review
I love when the unicorns explode. It's what keeps me reading. Only kidding bre keeps me reading Report Review
I WANT A COOKIE! but actually I was planning on reviewing anyways, promise! I love your sense of humor, I laughed the whole way through although it may have been more of a chuckle I'm not sureAuthor's Response: nono, feel free to have a cookie ^_^ thank yousss. Report Review
This is a good story! I like Asteria and her adventures in Quidittch. Thank you for writing!Author's Response: ah, thank you very much ^_^ Report Review
This is so interesting! I loved the start you've got going on here, it captured me straight away. I love the character interactions! Asteria is just pure awesome.
- SexyDoorFramesAuthor's Response: Aw, thank you very much :3 this review really made my day!
I must say, this is a lovely, well-written story so far. I don't usually go for sort of Quidditch-based stories, but this one works for me. Keep up the good work :)Author's Response: thank you veryvery much :3 I'm glad that you like it ^_^
byee! Report Review
Ooo...can't wait for more! Please update soon?Author's Response: Well, as you may have read in the authors note, this wont be updated until the second chapter of my new story ><
But I'll try and get it out as soon as possible :)
thanks for the review!
ASTERIA is awesome.
YOU are awesome.
THIS WHOLE THING IS AWESOME.
I hate Hamish. Ha.Author's Response: NO, YOU ARE AWESOME.
N'aww, don't hate Hamish! He's so cute ^___^ (in a stalker-may-actually-eat-you way)
YOUR REVIEW IS AWESOME.
BYEEE. Report Review
YOU ARE EVIL! COME ONE UPDATE SOON! I MEAN NO AUTHOR (BESIDES ME) UPDATES EVERYTIME THEIR CHAPTER IS POSTED!Author's Response: I'M REALLY SORRY. THIS STORY WILL NOT BE UPDATED UNTIL THE SECOND CHAPTER OF MY NEW STORY IS UP.
(UNLESS I HAVE A SUDDEN BURST OF INSPIRATION, AND MY MUSE DECIDES TO COME BACK)
YAAAY FOR CAPITALS.
BYEEE ^_^ Report Review
Well Oak Wood just seems lovely doesn't he.
"If you skip practise I will kill you the eat you."
Smashing guy. I want more food.Author's Response: He is simply smashing.
I will give you food..soon..*evil laugh*
thankyou for the review! Report Review
Hehe I want beat up Hamish let me just get my baseball bat but on the other hand good story.
Darn no food for this chapter.Author's Response: No! Don't beat up Hamish! He's cute in a delightfully stalker-ish way -cuddles imaginary character-
thank you and byee! Report Review
I love the part where he said "now it between your legs" and what she said after. now . . . 3
GIVE ME THE CHESSECAKE!
please put in an envelope and mail it to me.Author's Response: I shall, my friend, I shall..
Thank you! ^_^ Report Review
That girl seems like my type of friend. I like your story now . . .
GIVE ME THE DAMN COOKIE!Author's Response: *throws cookie*
there ya go!
thanks for your review ^_^ Report Review
New story. coolio. I already stalk you on formspring. ;)
Loved this chapter. I liked Hamish's reference to what happened to Cormac. Dear God, the boy is absolutely bonkers. He's quite freaky, I love how she didn't overreact to Hamish.
I love Asteria's character, she's too cool.
Can't wait for your new story and your update on this!
:)Author's Response: WELL HELLO THERE.
So, you stalk me huh? ;)
thank you for your lovely comments and such. Hamish is quite delightfully bonkers, and he often makes me laugh ^_^ Bless 'im.
Asteria is the type to overreact at small things and barely care when big things happen. So backwards..
BYEE. I WILL SEE YOU ON FORMSPRING.
I adore your characters. I lovelovelovelove them.
Not much else to say.
10/10 (for all four chapters)Author's Response: ^_^
I lovelovelovelove this review :) Glad that you like! Report Review
I love your James, he's funny and a bit weird. He seems perfect for Asteria.
Oh, I absolutely adored the team introductions, they're such a cool bunch. :)Author's Response: Thank you :) Everything changes next chapter, though.
Because I wrote this quite awhile ago, on another fanfiction site, the writing style is REALLY different to my style at the moment, so the next chapter is going to be slightly less..crazy? Still very Asteria, but a more refined writing style. If y'see what I mean?
Tehe, I don't even know why I told you that; it has nothing to do with your review!
Thanks and bye- these reviews have made my day :D Report Review
Hamish, Oak. I love your character names, especially oak wood, how unfortunate.
Mucker Fudge, has to be the best fake swear word ever. I'm going to start using that now. :)Author's Response: Chyeaaah, best swear-word EVERRR.
Hamish is such a naff name that McLaggen just had to have it, and Oak, well... that was a crazy moment of mine when I first wrote this..
Thanks! ^_^ Report Review
I love how she already knew the quidditch positions even though she wasn't paying attention. I love Asteria, I want her for a loopy best friend.
Does James have a tiny crush on her?Author's Response: At the moment, James is a bit oblivious to Asteria; she's just that crazy girl that can't fly who he occasionally winds up, because he loves the way the tip of her nose goes pink when she's angry. He also can't help his heart jumping into his throat every single time Wood makes her do a wronksi-feint.
But honestly, James doesn't really know who she is, or what she's like (apart from being a bit crazy)
tehehe. Thanks for the review ^_^ Report Review
Awesome, I love Asteria, I can't believe she dresses like Kesha from the naughties, that is genius. I guess that makes her retro even though that's our time.
This is so funny and exploding unicorns ftw. :)Author's Response: Yeah, Asteria is a retro-dresser ^_^ Even though I've got to take Ke$ha out because we're not allowed mentions of living-persons anymore. :(
Thank you for the review, m'dear :D Report Review
ahhh...a shoelace thief ! LOVELY! ;)
cant wiat for the next chapter :)Author's Response: Thank you- these reviews have made me smile ^_^ Report Review
Oak Wood. His parents must be cruel, cruel people. Or either very high when they named him
sooo true...i was totally LOLing at his name :PAuthor's Response: Chyeah, his parents were cruel, cruel people..
Thank you! Report Review
Wronksi Fient?? hahahha !! awesomeness..
poor james... so deluded ! :PAuthor's Response: Yes, he can be a bit of a prick ^_^ Thaanks for the review(: Report Review
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