There are a lot of things in here that don't make sense. Like you don't remember certain things that were said in earlier chapters. One being that the harpies cut ginny before the wedding when in this chapter you said she leaves until she is ready to come back. I think you need to read the back chapters before you write any more chapters so you can get certain things right. Especially since Hermione didnt bring up the whole lavender draco thing and we all know she would have especially they way you are writing her. there is just so many things like that all through out the story. Its good but so confusing when you say one thing and then change it a couple chapters later. Report Review
I love your story... im dying for the end!!! Report Review
Awww Draco's bad? That kind of sucks. Report Review
Omg !! I've been addicted to this story for the past 2 days (with work and stuff) but Malfoy doesn't really care for her !?!?! Ahh the suspense is killing me. Report Review
No!! Draco can't be the bad guy!! I like the turn of events but I do hope that Draco and Hermione stay together for real Report Review
Can't wait to read this next chapter! Report Review
I just absolutely love your story. I am just pained slightly of how wonderful you write! Haha I wish I could detail more emotions in my writing... any way! Cant wait to carry on with your story. Report Review
I found this story yesterday, and i've just finished it, this story has had me hooked, i just...eurgh, YOU CHEEKY DEVIL YOU!, you made him the bad guy, im literally crying now, because i honestly thought he was good in this, with the way he was acting, and what he was saying to Hermione, BUT NO, it was a lie :( i dont know what to do with myself now, as it is such a good story line. Im keeping my fingers crossed, like someone else said, that it is not Draco, that he is under the imperious curse, or that someone has take poly juice to be home, ahh, i really hope you update soon, as i NEED to know what is going to happen, otherwise it will drive me insane! Thankyou for a brilliant, surprising yet sad chapter Report Review
I know I've read this before but it just gets better and better every time I read it :D Report Review
Wow I love how detailed and unique your writing is. Your words really give out a wonderful picture. Report Review
NO you've had me hooked on this story all day... Why have you turned Draco into the bad guy :'( Report Review
Oh my goodness. Your story is absolutely amazing!! I admire your writing! kEEP WRITING! But omg, I was not expecting Draco to do this with the way he was acting toward Hermione, but like one of the previous reviewers said, maybe it isn't him.. but maybe it is, you never know with Draco Malfoy! :/ Report Review
Bloody hell Haha was not expecting
that!! More please x Report Review
i wish it was hermione who came in the middle and took sectumsempra, it would be more dramatic but u write wonderfull. thumbs-up. Report Review
OMG YOU'RE BACK! I literally shrieked and did a happy dance when I saw the new chapter. Speaking of which, yes, the plan is slowly being unraveled right now. Is pansy taking lav's place? It makes more sense that the real mastermind would be behind this all. Because then her "child" could be Draco's child. Which explains the love-child. But speaking of Draco, NO. I refuse to accept the last few lines of this chapter. PLEASE tell me that it's not really Draco and that he's been Imperiused or something. I can't take that!!! After all the amazing Dramione moments you've given us... Is it real? Or still part of the plan? Aagh... I guess I'll just have to wait and see again, huh? Well then, see you next chapter! :)
PS: that was a really well written chapter (as always)! Report Review
Um, I don't know how I feel about this chapter. Speechless and confused I think are the words I can manage to describe this chapter. But in a good way f course! Can't wait to see what the heck happens!! You definitely caught me by surprise at the end. Can't wait for more Report Review
I started reading this last night and finished this morning can't wait for more chapters! love Dramoine. Report Review
argh flipping goodness. this story frustrates me so much im not even joking! i love it so much but its so insanely confusing with all this stuff happening and so many people being evil and plotting and argh :/
ok and you asked for theories so here is my most likely very very off track theory:
ok so the letter from the mysterious "L" isnt lav... and im probably crazy but im thinking that its from Lucius? yes? No? maybe? because that kinda fits with what narcissa was saying in the last chapter...
also the letter annoys me cuz its all like "no time to explain..." WELL IF THERE WAS TIME TO WRITE A LETTER HOW COME YOU COULDNT WRITE A PROPER ONE THAT EASILY EXPLAINS WHATS GOING ON CUZ I HAVE ABSOLUTELY NO IDEA AT ALL AND WHY CANT ANYONE SIGN WITH THEIR WHOLE NAME?! I MEAN COME ON PEOPLE! YOURE MEANT TO BE MAGICAL FOR CRYING OUT LOUD! (sorry for the rant i understand that for the sake of the story you cant actually just give everything away... )
also this is probably wrong as well but im sure my horrible guessing skills will give you a laugh since theyre so off base...
im thinking that just say lav's baby IS RONS baby, that maybe it wasnt an accident that she got pregnant with his child in the first place. cuz pansy was saying "you got what you wanted etc" and im thinking that maybe val, lav, pansy and roger did something that made it certain that lav got pregnant...? like idk a potion or spell? im sure there would be something... and yep so maybe the thing that roger knows about lavs baby is that it wasnt an accident on her part.
sorry if that didnt make any sense at all. im gonna stop typing now and eagerly await another chapter!
btw. love the dramione in the chapter :D Report Review
i am so flipping confused with the whole lavender/davies/pansy/val evil plot thing going on. argh i do not have any idea what there plan is and its frustrating me and freaking me out ajsdaskdljsadasdjsaifjkdf!
i need to know what happens next asap!
anyway great chapter! Report Review
OMG! I just started reading this story and literally finished all thirty eight chapters a day after starting. It's such a great story, love it! OMG can't wait for more XD Report Review
Cannot wait for the next chapter!! Was so excited to find two I hadn't yet read this morning...Keep up the good work!! Report Review
WOW. That is literally the only word that can come to my lips at this precise moment!! I love the plot and story line so much since I literally ship all of these ships and no others. You are such a skilled writer and I am so hooked on this story... I basically read it non stop for at least four hours before I realised I kind of had a life :) Please update soon!!! I can't wait to find out what Val, Roger, Pansy and Lavender have plotted and what's going to happen! Sorry this is long but I thought I would fill it for all the chapters that I have read :) I'll look forward to reading the next chapter soon Report Review
omg i cant wait for the next chapter...i really love your story...great work Report Review
Nice to see a really quick update, its making me nervous but excited for the end! I really dont know what I'm going to do without this story though, waa.
FINALLY the letter is getting solved (I think), and I am starting to get an idea what its about (really big stab in the dark here!)
I think that the letter is from Lucius, and that something has happened (linking to what Narcissa said last chapter)
although I cant remember whether Lucius was there or not...
which then makes my plan make no sence...
I KNEW GINNY WAS PREGNANT LOL.
Of course Lavender is involved...thats just who she is!
I hate her.
Lovely chapter and looking forward to the next one YAY.
10/10 as always!:D Report Review
Amazing update! Can't wait to see what happens! :)Author's Response: Thank you so much! Report Review
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