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Review #1, by Jessica Waedley The journey of horror and an even worse bet

15th May 2012:
Very interesting! not sure about the list dare thing.but it did add a twist to the story!

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Review #2, by jassamaria keplie Lovely scarlet train

15th May 2012:
cool. this is a very interesting piece of writing. Keep up the good work!

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Review #3, by hiddenbyhair Dare number one

14th May 2012:
i don't hve anything worth criticizing (u may not be shocked but my friends consider me an english snob)

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Review #4, by BlackIsAwesome The journey of horror and an even worse bet

27th November 2011:
Hehe, their list is awesome
can't wait to see how that plays out :P
cool story, btw :)

Author's Response: Thanks :))

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Review #5, by LSU4evr The journey of horror and an even worse bet

25th November 2011:
so i really like the content of this story. it's a funny start, and it looks promising. :) One thing though: you have a fair amount of grammar issues, particularly regarding helping verbs, tenses, and use of colons and semicolons. getting someone else to take a look at it should polish that up easily though. other than that, great story so far! looking forward to more. :)

Author's Response: Okay thank you for telling me.
English is my second language and no one I know speaks english that well xD
I'll have to try finding somebody who can correct my grammar mistakes ;)
Thank you for the review. :)


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