Love this, I only found it because of your other story, Secrets of A Slytherin Princess, which I totally love :D Report Review
Interesting idea! I haven't had the chance to read "Slytherin Princess" but I like your writting so I might give it a shot! The only thing that bothered me a little in this chapter was the redondance of some words (precocious...) and even sequences; for exemple, you mentionned 3 times in the same chapter that Albus gave the girls sweets; it's cute and funny yes, but there is no need for it to be repeated so many times. Other than that, great job, I can't wait to read the rest! Report Review
May I say, perfect? I can't explain how it's just wonderful. Report Review
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