ooOO this sounds like it will shape up to be a very interesting story :D I'm looking forward to reading more.
The amnesia was very well explained, I liked the way it wasn't everything, only the past five years. It'll be interesting seeing her having to learn everything about Hogwarts again, I hope you're up for the challenge!
James, James, James. I loved his reaction "'What's a keeper?' she asks! 'What's a bloody keeper?'"
ahh I love it, James is awesome :D
I hope you continue with this story because I would like to hear more about Ms Riley Thomas ;D
thanks for sharing this chapter with us!
10/10Author's Response: Tee hee! Thank you so much. I've wanted to write an amnesia story for a while now but I just finally got around to it.
James is so much fun to write. I think he might be my favorite just because his ego's so big. xD Hopefully I can keep up with him.
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I really love this! Riley seems so nice, and you've explained her amnesia perfectly. This was a perfect opening to what I know will be a FANTASTICCC story! I can't wait for more! Brilliant work.Author's Response: Wow, I'm glad you like it so much! It really gives me a boost of confidence~. Thank you so much for your support! x3 Report Review
Nice~ Keep it up~ This should be interesting.Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm really glad you like it! :) Report Review
I like your story so far :) Typical James to only think of Quidditch. :D I think the ending fits :)Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like the ending. I'm never quite sure how to end my chapters without throwing in horrible cliffhangers... Report Review
I really like this story. When will you update? Can it be soon? I don't wanna wait :)Author's Response: Hee hee. I'm working on it~. ^_^ Thanks for your support! Report Review
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