i just discovered your story and I LOVE it! oliver/oc stories are my favourites on hpff and this is one of the best i've read so far. can't wait for the next chapter! xx

Author's Response: Awww thanks!! :) I'll try and update soon!! :D

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Hehe... It frees Talli up for Oli >_< But I can imagine Oliver instilling some fear into Allen's heart! Or the twins and him pranking Allen!

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I nkow I've probably written sooo many revies for this story but I love it! Update when you can :D

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Stupid allen. Poor talli. I love this story and merlin. That is the best show. Update soon please. 10/10 : )

Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your reviews!! No Talli is a year younger than Oliver! She's a 6th year! :D And I just love it. So much. haha

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I like the multiple povs. Poor talli 9/10 : )

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The party was epic. 9/10 : )

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That was really sad. Poor talli 9/10 : )

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Im glad her date with allen went well. Her poor mum 9/10 : )

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Haha i loved the ending 9/10 : )

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So oliver really did like talli 8/10 : )

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I liked hearing what happened from ollies pov. Stupid fred though 9/10 : )

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The party was entertaining

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Oliver sounds like a jerk 8/10 : )

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Is talli in her seventh year? 8/10 : )

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This was a great start 8/10

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Oliver should have let Talli punch Allan...Or he should have punched him for her. Either one. (:
And Oliver and Talli should definitely have a physical relationship first. Make it more interesting.

Author's Response: That would have been great. haha. But she will get him back in the next chapter, have no fear! haha.
And, yeah, they do seem like the type to have a physical relationship first huh?

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Yay! This is a really good story. Every time Talli starts crying about losing her parents it makes me cry ): as to your question about Talli and Oliver..I think it makes more sense for them to have a physical relationship, then an actual relationship. It would be weird for them to just start being friends and dating at once.

Author's Response: Hey thanks for the reviewing! I am so glad that you like it! And sorry about that...her crying should start to get a little better now :) And I think that is what everyone has said. I don't think I have had anyone say they should have an actual relationship. haha

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Absolutely love this story! Update soon!

p.s. Talli and Oliver need to get it together!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I will try and update soon!

And they will soon :P kind of.

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Pure freakin magic!!! haha The only suggestion I have is to keep writing!! My favorite charatcer has to be George in this story! He just kindof ties the group together for me!

Author's Response: I'm so glad that you enjoy it! :) You don't have to worry, I have every intention to finish writing this story :) I love George too, and he kind of does. He is the sweet one, and he is good at picking up his friends' messes lol :)

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woah. just just... woah... that was awesome!!! I like the way you used Oliver to snap Talli out of the stupor she was in! And yes Pottermore is freaking amazing! Can't wait till the next chapter!

Author's Response: Ahh! Thank you! I'm so glad that you enjoyed that :) hehe! :D I shall try and update soon, I have the outline for it done, it's just a matter of actually writing it (or having the time! :P)

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That was a very nice and fun chapter after the previous ones which were a bit darker. Hope you update soon :)

Author's Response: Yeah, I figured we needed a lighter chapter after that. haha. And I'll try! :)

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*Trys to hold in laughter* No... its... its not gonna work.. *bursts out laughing* that was sooo hysterical! Uhmm one thing... this is my grammar and crazy stuff showing here... in the first main big pararagraph you put "People would try and talk to me and would try and talk to me" Im not sure if that was purposeful or what but I just thought I'd let you know! And yeah Dr. Who is totally amazing!!! Besides that little thing which I'm not sure you care about... it was an awesome chapter!

Author's Response: HAHA :D Thanks for reviewing! I love your reviews they make me smile! hehe. And no, it was an accident. Oops, I wanted to get this chapter up so I didn't read through it like I normally do.
And isn't it amazing? :P I love it!

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I beg you for another chapter! I seriously hope you plan on finishing this story! :-)

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks so much for the review! I promise I intend on finishing this story! So no worries :P I will try and update soon!!

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This is a brilliant story! PLEASE, PLEASE finish it!!! O and Fred is gorgeous :) He makes me froth...(yes, I am strange)

Author's Response: haha! I'm so glad you like it! Isn't he? :) And don't worry I fully plan on finishing this story, summer is almost here and hopefully updates will be quicker after that! Thanks for reviewing!

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=*( doesn't help that I'm going to a funeral tomorrow... so sad... I didn't like how they immediately got into a snow ball fight when they got back from the funeral...but I guess it was an antic of the twins to try to lighten the mood. I hated that the minister of magic got her name wrong...and he claimed to be friends with her father. *shakes head in disappointed anger*

Author's Response: Hey! Oh I'm sorry to hear that! I know, it was an antic of the twins to try and cheer her up because that's just how they are. I know, but I thought about it, and realized that was the best way to go about it. He never really knew Talli, or anything about her family. He was more trying to push for war. I know he's really cruel...
Thanks for reviewing though :)

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