3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Hollie. Battle of Hogwarts - What happend in The Chamber of Secrets?

24th October 2010:
I loved this, it's really stalwart and emotional. I really enjoyed it and found it really powerful and creative. There's a Really perfect choice of adjectives and I love the imagery.

Author's Response: Thankyouu :)

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Review #2, by PhoenixTailAndHolly Battle of Hogwarts - What happend in The Chamber of Secrets?

20th October 2010:
nice! Through there were some mistakes in grammar, the story was nice. Try working on your tempo. Build up slowly, using lots of narrative and observations, then slowly pick up the speed with more dialogue and action. Rated this story 7/10

Author's Response: Yeah pace is something I will improve on as I write more I think. Thanks for the review.

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Review #3, by Akussa Battle of Hogwarts - What happend in The Chamber of Secrets?

18th October 2010:
Hum, well, I really liked the beginning. Well written, good pacing and godd charaterization. But, since I am a big sucker for cannon, I wasn't a big fan of the way you ended this story. Sorry about saying this. I guess it would have been great if it happened liked that (although I'm not sure how Ron would react to showing himself so weak in front of Hermione!) but you should put AU in the summary. It's still a great piece and would have been quite enjoyable if I had not been expecting to read how Hermione reacted to destroying her Horcrux!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'll be more specific in the summary next time :)

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