Very Good piece of righting BRAVO

Author's Response: Thanks :) It's not one of my best pieces, i'm writing some more at the moment, i hope you like them more than this, as i am very disappointed in this story :(

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arrrgh...update son please...i loved it...probs AU but o well...:)
i love the flirting and all that and the story so farrr.so pleassseee update soon..:)))x

Author's Response: aw, thank you so much! Don't worry working on it now! :D xoxo

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This story has potential, but I'm very confused on when the story takes place, how old the marauders are and what year, and the girls age. All of this should have been said in the first couple paragraphs in the first ch. Also slow down the pacing.
I really want this story to succeed, so I'm sorry if I'm being harsh, I just want you to grow as an author!!

Author's Response: Yes, thank you so much the girls are in 2nd year, and the boys are in 3rd i explain it (kinda, lol) in the third chapter, i know it's late but i didn't know where else to put it lol. SORRY. :( BTW what do you mean by 'slowing down the pace'?? just wondering.

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I love it. I love stories with lots of flirting in it and this has lots of it. What is she going to do to Sirius? I feel like I might have an idea, but I could always be wrong. ;) I can't wait to read more. Update soon! :)

Author's Response: sorry i took so long in responding, you have NO idea how many stories i'm trying to write at once, lol. :D. Whats your idea, i'd love to hear, i'm open to all opinions, ;), i need a bit of help anywayz lol.

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Interesting. ;D
I think it's really good, so far. Only thing is, you forgot to capitalize some letters. (I, not i. XD).

Author's Response: Whoops! :) Thanks, i'll fix them up when i get the chance :)

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I love the story so far. There is lots of flirting with Sirius and I love it. I also like the flirting between James and Lily. I can't wait to read more. Update soon! :)

Author's Response: Awesome thanks! I really appreciate it. :) Next chapter will be comeing up soom. :D

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This is a really great first chapter! I especially like Likuta's character, although I think she needs a nickname. :) Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Awesome, i'll think of one. Do you have any idea's? I'm open to suggestions. :)

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