I liked it! It was very cute. Please write more! And I think you described Ron enough, but not Harry's personality at all. But Hermione is a lot like in the books, great job on her. Overall, a great start, please write more soon!Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I will describe Harry more, just like you suggested. And I obvisouly plan on writing more, so keep an eye out for more chapters ~headlaura Report Review
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