very good chapter...loved it.

Author's Response: I'm glad you did! :))

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The introduction was Great it was pretty much interesting and I really like how u describe things...hope u will make more stories and good chapters... :))

Author's Response: Thank you!! And I thought that describing things and situations wasn't exactly my thing, especially in this story -and I'm trying to work on it! I'm glad you liked it, and I will post more stories and more -hopefully- good chapters!!

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that was an amazing story !!! She is an author with future !!! well done keep on writing !!!

Author's Response: Thanks!! Your review means so much my dear friend! :P

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After reading your story; which incidentally I found enthralling, I am surprised that more people haven't reviewed. I have a theory about why that could be. I have been stuck on page one of the dramione stories for a week because there are so many new stories or updates at present; ergo you get shoved further on. Knowing this, I was determined to tear myself away. I'm so glad I did as I am enjoying your excellent story. More soon please.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for leaving a review and for your kind words!! The next chapter is waiting for validation, and I hope that you'll enjoy it as much as you did with the first 5!

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heyy again :D

so i loved this chapter!! :DD

but just to give some critical advice.

first please get a beta and fix your spelling.

second with a complicated plot like ( or any plot line really) you need to give detail. Give information. describe. Paint the picture. The full picture. Because its confusing and not well structured if you dont.

and third I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!! dont worry about ppl not reviewing! they are lazy ppl!

oh and get a banner! Banners attract attention. Maybe change the summary and make it more enthralling. :)

Of course you may ignore everything I just said. :)

But either way this is an awesome plot and I do hope you continue :DD

Author's Response: Forever Pirate, thank you soo much for your inspiring reviews! Of course I will continue! And about the banner... I've made a couple of banners, but I have completely no idea how to add it! Can you help?
Once again, thanks for your reviews, and I will try to improve my story as much as I can!

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hmm wonder why :)
as i said its a good idea! keep writing! :DD

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WHY IS IT SHORT!!??!??!??!?

lol i mean its great but yeh... make it longer!! :DDD
xx

Author's Response: Well... I myself don't really think of it as a chapter... more like something to get the plot going, and connect the dots, you know??

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hmm interesting ;)
i look forward to more!!

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yes why is it short?
i reckon you need a BETA! :DD
its an interesting idea. However you need correct grammar for example even you spelled Zabini wrong.
Otherwise tho its an interesting idea for a story and I shall now go read the next chapter :D

Author's Response: Yeah... sorry about that... it's just that I don't own the English version (since I live in Greece, so it was easier to buy the Greek version) and well, I kind of guessed how Blase's last name is spelled! And, yes, I know I need a BETA, I just don't really know where, or how to look... Sorry for it's length, I promise the following chapters will be longer (chapter 6 and up!)
Thank you so much for your review!!!

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A little confusing could have been organized bit better. But I liked the plot!

Author's Response: Sorry... but I think you know how it is with writers, nothing can confuse us in our own stories! Thank you so much for your review, and I'm glad you like it!

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This was done well. :) Cant wait to see what happens next.
With lots of love,
Lady Fulula the Forgetful

Author's Response: thank you so much!!! you really have no idea how much your opinion means to me!

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