Hi there! First off, I'd like to congratulate you for such an evoking story. You could really feel her sadness because she wasn't with him. You used truly beautiful words that opened up the soul of your character to us. From her thoughts, she seems to have so much depth. She can feel with such a passion it almost burns. And I must confess myself surprised. I didn't read many stories where a girl likes Harry and he doesn't like her back. In fact, this is the first story I have ever read with Harry mentioned as the love interest of an OC. And I am very pleased with it. Congrats! :D House Cup 2011, End of an Era Review Extravaganza Forum name: Debra20 House: Gryffindor Report Review
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