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Review #1, by patronus_charm don't you let me go, let me go tonight.

11th July 2014:

Wow, there were so many amazing things with this story I donít quite know where to start! First of all, I loved how you never specified who this couple was or gave any remote hints about it really as it just gave this story so much more power and really made it poignant and left me thinking. I think it was because it could be applicable to so many people and thatís why I really loved it.

Your description and language in this was truly stunning and I would quote everything but that would be the whole story as every line was mesmerising. However, this ĎMy bloodclots are made of glass, now. I have a pulse that sparkles.í Really stood out to me as it was just so unique and amazing and I love it! ♥

Another thing I really loved was how reversed the usually negative aspects of snow and made them into happier ones, because it seemed as if here it would reunite the couple again and stop the heart from breaking and the person from freezing as they would be together, whole, again and that twist was really great and unique.

Basically, I loved this so much as your emotions and feelings were so clear and apparent throughout and it was really beautiful writing too. This was a great piece of work! ♥

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Review #2, by DP48 don't you let me go, let me go tonight.

10th June 2014:
This is really beautiful and poetic. I really felt all the emotions. Good job :') (P.S. that's me with a smile and a tear because of the feels)

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Review #3, by tothoseinterested don't you let me go, let me go tonight.

3rd October 2013:
Everything is brilliant. I love the symbolism and the POV and everything about this piece. It's beautiful.

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Review #4, by purplepotter77 don't you let me go, let me go tonight.

16th July 2013:
Usually, in most things I've read, the winter symbolizes heartbreak and sadness. I love how here, it's the spring that shows the heartbreak and sadness; it's such an original concept and you've made it work so well here, especially with the confetti and kaleidoscopes!

I've never read a Dominque/Lysander fic before, so that in itself was so interesting. I love all the imagery you used. Everything was written so eloquently and the whole thing flowed very well. I don't know why, but for some reason, this sort of reminded me of Hades/Persephone? I think it was mostly because of the spring stuff.

"You can't just put me together again. You can't pick my scattered pieces off the ground and tell me that everything's okay because youloveme, youwantme, youneedme." I loved this because in so many fics, there's a character that's broken and there's another character that fixes them because they're in love or whatever. I love how your story wasn't like that, because sometimes, it can take more to fix a person. All in all, lovely job with this! I really enjoyed reading it!

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Review #5, by Shay_Gryff don't you let me go, let me go tonight.

4th September 2012:
WOW. There are no words to describe the amazing-ness of this. None.


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Review #6, by Erised don't you let me go, let me go tonight.

18th July 2012:

It's really interesting to read a story from a second POV, as they're quite tricky to do, but I think you pulled it off brilliant. I also applaud you for using an obscure pairing - Dom/Lysander definitely isn't something I'd consider usually.

Your writing style is very eloquent and is simply lovely to read. I really enjoyed the quite clinical way of writing with the lists and 'sub points' - it felt very matter-of-fact and was really interesting to read.

Although this isn't a major points, I would have liked to have seen a little more setting, just even a detail of where they were, what they were looking at etc, but it's just fine without it. I'm just nitpicking really!

Great work :)

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Review #7, by PygmyPuffLover don't you let me go, let me go tonight.

5th September 2011:
Oh my gosh.
This was so beautiful, but so sad at the same time :(
This is one of the best and emotional one shots I have ever read, it's so sweet.

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Review #8, by rainie don't you let me go, let me go tonight.

2nd September 2011:
really moving but i was slightly conused about the pov? im sorry, maybe its just me lol. either way, the story was beautiful

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Review #9, by moth don't you let me go, let me go tonight.

14th April 2011:
you certainly have the way with words. I was moved by your story - simple, yet stunning. I especially loved the part when you compared a shattered heart to caleidoscope, it really got to me.
good job!

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Review #10, by dark_angel_14 don't you let me go, let me go tonight.

10th April 2011:
I think I like it. It's a little confusing but it's good at the same time (:


P.S I caught up on clash so you should post the next chapter (: or the next 10 chapters Whatever works for you (:

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Review #11, by MarsIsBrightTonight don't you let me go, let me go tonight.

25th January 2011:
That was beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. *Claps*


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Review #12, by its ellie weasley yo don't you let me go, let me go tonight.

29th October 2010:
so beautiful. i honestly can't even elaborate and make this a good review, because i'm pretty speechless to be quite honest. i love this. a lot.

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