WOW. There are no words to describe the amazing-ness of this. None.

KEEP WRITING :D
Shay_Gryff

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Hey!

It's really interesting to read a story from a second POV, as they're quite tricky to do, but I think you pulled it off brilliant. I also applaud you for using an obscure pairing - Dom/Lysander definitely isn't something I'd consider usually.

Your writing style is very eloquent and is simply lovely to read. I really enjoyed the quite clinical way of writing with the lists and 'sub points' - it felt very matter-of-fact and was really interesting to read.

Although this isn't a major points, I would have liked to have seen a little more setting, just even a detail of where they were, what they were looking at etc, but it's just fine without it. I'm just nitpicking really!

Great work :)

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Oh my gosh.
This was so beautiful, but so sad at the same time :(
This is one of the best and emotional one shots I have ever read, it's so sweet.
10/10

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really moving but i was slightly conused about the pov? im sorry, maybe its just me lol. either way, the story was beautiful

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you certainly have the way with words. I was moved by your story - simple, yet stunning. I especially loved the part when you compared a shattered heart to caleidoscope, it really got to me.
good job!

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I think I like it. It's a little confusing but it's good at the same time (:

~K.K~

P.S I caught up on clash so you should post the next chapter (: or the next 10 chapters Whatever works for you (:

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That was beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. *Claps*

rah

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so beautiful. i honestly can't even elaborate and make this a good review, because i'm pretty speechless to be quite honest. i love this. a lot.

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