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7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by mef_hplvr Chapter 1

18th July 2013:
Aww precious!! Update soon please!!

Author's Response: The next chapter is in progress and should be up soon!

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Review #2, by dramioneotp Chapter 1

11th July 2013:
I personally love this keep going

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed it

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Review #3, by weasleywizardwheezes101 Chapter 1

10th July 2011:
Great beginning to the story! I love it so far! The only problem I have is sometimes there's a confusion with words. And the pronoun "I" needs to be capitalized. Otherwise great idea for the story!
-Arya

Author's Response: Thanks im going to try a little break here and edit through some of the grammer errors


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Review #4, by ravenclaw_79 Chapter 1

24th November 2010:
Just some advice,
You should probably do a spell/grammar check when you are done writing, as this was quite hard to understand.

Author's Response: I read this review and another one like it then the chp that needed fixing and i saw the problem i changed it and now its in the quene getting fixed im so sorry i didnt catch this eariler

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Review #5, by ReemerFletcher Chapter 1

28th October 2010:
Cool can't wait to see how the story develops and find out Baby Girl Malfoy's name (:

Author's Response: Yay its going through validation again they keep making me change it please keep reading

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Review #6, by charmed92 Chapter 1

17th October 2010:
Hey,
I really like your story! Please continue! I can not wait for the update! So, update soon!
Yours
charmed92

Author's Response: Aww thanks so much i luv hearing from you guys it brightens my day and i will the 2nd chp is getting checked now tell me what you think of it

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Review #7, by Amanda Chapter 1

15th October 2010:
I think you should keep it in one point of view per chapter. Otherwise it might get confusing. Maybe do a hole chapter in Hermoines POV, for as long as it takes to make a chapter, than the next one from the same spot her's started in in Draco's. Maybe a little confusing, but I hope I helped! Otherwise, very good for a Intro (:

Author's Response: Thanks so much i was thinking about doing that and i ended up going against my better judgement thanks so much keep reading

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