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Review #1, by Courtney Chapter 2: Marauder's Era

12th July 2013:
Well I found it annoying that James had no problem snogging both of Lily's friends but didn't want her to snog anyone else. If I were Lily I would be really annoyed at him for being so hypocritical and having a double standard and for Michelle and Ana making out with him when they knew she liked him. Well I only respect Remus and Lily since you made it seem like they didn't kiss and since no one else cared about anyone else's feelings. I guess why I personally think a game like this is a bad idea if people are in relationships. I usually like the James/Lily pairing (thought not particularly here) and also like Rose/Scorpius so I wouldn't mind seeing more of either of them.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I am sorry for James and Lily being OOC but they were drunk and it was a fun night out. I will try and write some more:)

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Review #2, by lanniejo The First Little Problem

4th August 2011:
good writing, maybe a little less snogging, and I'm confused as too who's the main character...but over all kind of nice! :D

Author's Response: thanks for your review :)

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Review #3, by leo master The First Little Problem

4th November 2010:
it's good but i think you should make them a bit older and then make that kind of romance.
-leo master

Author's Response: okay thank you... :)

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Review #4, by team ROSE&SCORP The First Little Problem

26th October 2010:
Love it! tho u culd make them older...cuz they'r a bit young 2 b snoggin... :)

Author's Response: Thanks...I'm posting a new story based on this, only they're a bit older...hope you like it! :)

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Review #5, by joshandshellylover The First Little Problem

25th October 2010:
I LOVE this story...although I would like it better if they were a bit older so more romance could be possible :)
LOVE IT!! look at my name if you don't believe me!
^^

Author's Response: LOL! Thank You.you're my number 1 fan...WHO!
Thanks :D


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Review #6, by Malulis The First Little Problem

24th October 2010:
Hi, this is great! I love it, when are you going to write some more? When is the next one going to be online??? and I really like "Shelly"! Besos & abrazos!

Author's Response: Thank You...I'm not sure when the next one's going to be up...don't want to jinx it.

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Review #7, by ginnyslittlesisterforever The First Little Problem

21st October 2010:
um...it's a nice piece of writing but i can't see 11/12 year olds snogging each other...check the age that you give to your characters...

Author's Response: Thanks...i'm writing a kind of sequel to this but Rose, Michelle & Al are in Y6...please read it when it's validated...which i hope should be any day now...thanks for reading my one-shot...
michelle_ginny_potter :)


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Review #8, by Lana The First Little Problem

8th October 2010:
Well, it was entertaining...but...um somehow I cannot see an eleven year old getting snogged for ten seconds with tongue and with a person she just met, just saying though...(especially when she's british-they're not famous for their incapacity to express emotions over nothing). Anyway, it was a good try and I like it, but I'd advice you to remember what age you've given to your characters...
Lana

Author's Response: thank you I´ll try to remember that!

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