Reading Reviews for The Real Chosen One
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Review #1, by Jenny Oh Little Boy, You Make Me Laugh

3rd November 2010:
Yay! She met the golden trio! And she met the twins! They're my favorite characters. I hope they are in the story quite a bit. They're hillarious. I can't wait for the moment when Schuyler and Harry find out they're siblings. That will be interesting. I can't wait to read more. Update soon! :)

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Review #2, by RainMonster Oh Little Boy, You Make Me Laugh

2nd November 2010:
Wow, Taylor! Total awesomeness, way to fit in the pronunciation. Note: I think it was, like, 1995-ish during Harry's fifth year - so, no iPod. No Monster. Just to say. Again with the commas in some places - but not bad, I mean. EXCELLENT! Carry on.

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Review #3, by Jenny White is Such a Stupid Color

25th October 2010:
This is so sad. But I love it so far! Keep up the good work. I love the Haley Williams pictures by the way. Is that supposed to be Schuyler? I can't wait to read more. Update soon! :)

Author's Response: THANKS!!! And yes that's suspose to be Schuyler (just imagine the black hair.)

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Review #4, by the_BlueFox White is Such a Stupid Color

15th October 2010:
This chapter was THE SHIT. Way to go! Love the run in w/ Draco. Btw, the Hogwarts era was '91-'98 (or something like that) and I don't think they had iPods. Just sayin. ^U^ *feels smug and stuffs* Many less comma problems. GOOD JOB!


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Review #5, by the_BlueFox Murder, Adoption, and Europe

7th October 2010:
YAY TALRZ!!! U WROTE DA STORY!!! *gives 9/10 for missing commas*

Author's Response: Hellz Ya!!!

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Review #6, by DeilahMalfoy Murder, Adoption, and Europe

7th October 2010:
I request that you delete the "which is gay because" part in the first paragraph...Really don't appreciate you using it as a bad thing :(

Author's Response: I apologize if this offends you. I don't care if someone is gay or not. I don't hate them or think there bad people, it's just the way they are and they only think its a bad thing because society nowdays dictates that it is. Again I'm sorry.

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