This was hauntingly beautiful. (And one of my biggest fears coming to life, being widowed at a young age.) Heartbreaking, definitely, but beautifully written. I think Lily and James are my favourite couple, so it's so depressing to think of them being split up by death. They were so young when they got together, they should have had years and years but they never got them. =(Author's Response: Thank you ever so much. I really, really tried with this. The idea of one living without the other, be it James or Lily, I don't know, it really gets to me, and I wanted to bring it through. So it means a lot to me; thanks a lot for reviewing, too. Report Review
I feel so bad for James. You captured his pain at losing Lily perfectly. Beautiful.Author's Response: Why, thank you very much. I had been doubting if I'd managed to portray his pain, so your feedback is super appreciated. Thanks for reviewing. Report Review
Naww, how sad :( very well written though, I enjoyed it!Author's Response: Yeah, it is sad. I wanted to cry when I realized that was my story idea; I hate the idea of James and Lily being split apart by death.
Thank you very much; I'd doubted it a bit. So your feedback is very much appreciated. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
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