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Review #1, by The Last Marauder Pretend You're Okay

6th May 2011:
This story is very promising, I like how you depict Tonks, it's very convincing, I look forward to reading more. One thing though, I don't think Snape would call Tonks 'Tonks' he would say Nymphadora because he knows she doesn't like it. But other than that a really well written fic, it wasn't overly romantic or full of cringe-worthy cliches. Well done and do update soon, I look forward to reading some more.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I hadn't thought about Snape calling her Nymphadora, I might have to go back and change that. I hate cliches, haha, so I'm glad I didn't include any bad ones! The next chapter should be up tonight or tomorrow.

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Review #2, by seekers_destiny Pretend You're Okay

29th January 2011:
You did a good job of describing Tonks's mental state which has the unfortunate side effect of making this a rather depressing chapter. On the other hand, I enjoyed how Remus was able to get her to listen to him and how he tried to reassure her in his own way.

It wasn't until after I submitted my previous review that I noticed that I'd said pseudonym instead of chapter title. (sigh) Hopefully, I haven't messed this review up in some way...

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) Yes, this chapter is depressing, as I had intended it to be. Unfortunately, the next chapter will be rather depressing as well- but we'll get a happier chapter after that. I'm glad I did a good job of describing her mental state; it took me a while to come up with how to put the exact feeling I was going for in words.

Thanks again! :)

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Review #3, by i<3lunalovegood Of Metamor-Failure

13th December 2010:
please update soon!
its great!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The next chapter is awaiting validation. :)

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Review #4, by seekers_destiny Of Metamor-Failure

12th December 2010:
Tonks in a foul mood - not a pretty sight. Everyone has days like this, I just hope she doesn't have too many in a row... I hope she appreciates her parents, they seem very nice.

The word Metamor in your pseudonym just registered with me. I once worked for a small consulting company that was bought out by Metamor Worldwide then purchased in turn by a soon-to-be-doomed PsiNet. Fortunately, I bailed out before it all went bad. Does your pseudonym have anything to do with that? Although it must might be short of metamorphmagus...

Author's Response: Tonks, understandably, is very unhappy, and she's going to have a lot of days like this before she gets her happy(ish) ending. She gets along with her parents fairly well, but unfortunately she is a bit too depressed to appreciate them fully at the present.

Metamor has nothing to do with that, but that's interesting connection! I named the chapter because Tonks is having trouble with her Metamorphmagus abilities, so I replaced "-phmagus" with "failure.

Thanks for reading! :)

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Review #5, by LilyFire A Million Pieces

9th December 2010:
Youíve done really well. You captured Remus and Tonks perfectly, in my opinion. And you have the present tense thing down a lot better than I do, there are several slip-ups in my story that I never catch while editing, but I didnít notice one in yours.
I think this story has great potential, and is going to be great. Please donít make me (and your other readers) wait long for updates. This is a great starter chapter, it really draws me in. I canít wait for the rest of it.
P.S. On a side note, for a second I noticed if you leave out the word by at the top of the page, it says If Anyone Asks VoldemortIsGoingDown. Thought it was sorta funy.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you are enjoying it. I'm going to update as often as possible.

And that is funny, haha. :)

Thanks again!

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Review #6, by seekers_destiny A Million Pieces

5th December 2010:
It's a nice start and I like seeing viewpoints that JKR skipped. This chapter leaves me feeling a little - no, a lot - peeved with Remus. Git. However, it will be nice when he starts to come around.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Unfortunately, you will be peeved with Remus for quite a while-except maybe when you see things from his perspective and not Tonks'. Thanks again! :)

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Review #7, by laladosreis A Million Pieces

5th December 2010:
cool, i always wondered how did they get together, since Remus was so hesitant. i really enjoyed this!

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing/ being my first reviewer! I'm glad you liked it. :)

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