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Review #1, by smashed_crayon Meeting

28th December 2010:
I love James! And Ollie! And this story! Update soon, yeah?

Author's Response: Ahwe thanks !
I'll update as soon as the quene is open again!
thanks again!
lilly!


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Review #2, by smashed_crayon Asking.

28th December 2010:
Great first chapter:) I'm so jealous of Ollie! How can she not be covered in smiles at a date with James Potter? Anyway, great story, I have a feeling something funny is going to come out of this...

Author's Response: Ahwe thanks for the review :D
Something funny does happy but sadly it is not until the 3rd chapter which is not posted ! ohh sad :[
but I see you left a review for the second, lettme go look at that :D
thanks again!
lilly


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Review #3, by callmedaynuhh Meeting

23rd November 2010:
so the title is still confusing.. but i'm liking it soo far! :D

Author's Response: if you mean the title of the story, thats a nicname that someone comes of up with for her.
the title of the chapter , well I thought it made sense haha
anyway thank you very much for reviewing :D
Lovesslily


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Review #4, by riah Asking.

18th October 2010:
Aw! I want a James. Gimme! :D
I think this story has some great potential, and that you're a very good writer. I can't wait for the next chapter, update soon? (:
-Riah.

Author's Response: Ahwe, thanks ! I think I would also enjoy a James haha
I'm working on the next chapter but I'm a little stuck, oh well I'm sure it will come together to soon ^^
Thanks a bunch for the review ^^
and I would love if you checked out some of my other work :D
-Lils


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Review #5, by No_oneKnows Asking.

11th October 2010:
I think you write really well! :) But you haven't described your character enough so I couldn't really imagine it happening, since I didn't know what she looked like :P But it's a great story and you're definitely going somewhere with it!

Author's Response: The characters are described more in the next few chapters, I just hate starting off with all the descriptions. >.< Sometimes it seems a bit much to me.
And thank you very much :D
-Lils


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Review #6, by xXSeamus_and_DeanXx Asking.

10th October 2010:
i loved it! its really cute and sweet and the characters are very good! can wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Ahwee, thanks !
I'm working on the next chapter - it needs a bit of work though haha.
Thanks for the review !
-Lilly


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