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Review #1, by Debra20 Traitor

7th August 2011:
My reaction to this story: jaw-dropped! Seriously, I never would have expected Bellatrix, Alice Longbottom to have been friends. Especially since I have always pictured and calculated Alice to be older than Bellatrix. In my mind she was the same age as Molly Weasley.

Nevertheless, I enjoyed the story quite a lot. It has incredible twists (starting with the friendship between them), excellent visual description and good parts of action scenes. You really managed to convey a story in less than 1000 words. That's incredible! I love Alice with all my heart and I am currently plotting a novel around her and Frank Longbottom and the First Wizarding War. So this story goes straight to my favourites :D

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House: Gryffindor

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