Aww, sweet. I loved all the stuff about books, and about how nobody reads anymore - taking the words straight out of my mouth. You write so beautifully, I can't believe this story doesn't have more followers. I'm your number one fan at the moment!
Keep it up!Author's Response: This makes me so happy! You know I'm not one to care about how many followers I have, or how many people favourite this story... But even if only five people enjoyed it, and only five people liked it would be like winning a Nobel Prize to me.
But thank you so much. Report Review
I must say that you are clearly a capable writer with great enthusiasm. I really enjoyed reading your story, to me, it seemed to have something other stories lack, to which I applaude you! :) on a more technical note, I would suggest watching your spelling and punctuation in some places. You had one or two slip ups but other than that is was fairly well written. Hope to be reading more soon :DAuthor's Response: Well I always try to make them a little different so no one gets bored with the OC, because I am a fanatic about the Marauders, and I do love Remus/OC's a lot. But they always seem the same in a way.
Sometimes I think I'm just moving the characters on to fast, and I want it to be a more slow relationship type, but seems I'm sort of failing at that. But still thank you!
My grammar does seem to be the number one problem and I know I should watch out for that. I do try my best, I really do.
The second chapter is up and the third is being validated, and the fourth is being written so those should all be coming very soon.
- Alexa Report Review
Wowza! I love it! So deep, heartful, touching... I loved what she said about not living forever, just making something that will... that was awesome, put into words exaclt what I feel...
10/10Author's Response: Why thank you so much! This means a lot to mean... Thank you!
And I'm very philosophical and you'll be seeing that a lot in the next few chapters/stories.
Great concept, but the grammar was a little confusing. Easily fixable, anyways, great story. :)Author's Response: Well thank you, and yes I always try to find the grammar mistakes but my eyes never seem to point them out, but I always try my hardest. I hope you can understand my words though, and I'll try to edit it whenever is possible. It's just there's such a high demand all the time, and I need to get the chapters finished, but thank you. Report Review
Interesting. The chapter was great. I can't wait for more!!!Author's Response: Thank you, uh yeah. I wish they would validate my first chapter, but they wouldn't because of some thing or what not. But I think I'll just start off straight with the second chapter and go on from there. But yeah thank you, lots, and I will have the third chapter up soon. Report Review
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