Reading Reviews for As The Living Mourn The Dead
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by DeathMakesArtists Angels Without Names

26th August 2013:
Hi Jess!!!

Remember me? I was one of the people who loved to read and review your stories back in 2008. Then I disappeared without a trace for about 5 years. And lol now that everyone has matured and moved on from fanfiction I rediscovered my inner HP-obsessed child and realized that I wanted to write again, that I truly enjoy it. It seems you haven't been here for some time, but I do hope you come back every once in a while, and see this! You were so interesting to swap reviews with!

As for the actual review now -

Amazing. When I read about Lily's and Fred's reactions I started to cry. It was short and so sweet and touching. I love your descriptions and your dialogues. Remus is a sweetie, as always! ďAnd we are, love. Canít do anything about that now, Iím sorry.Ē Those are the cutest lines ever. I loved it!


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Review #2, by VioletBlade Angels Without Names

24th November 2010:
Wow this is so good! You are an amazing writer, and it chilled me reading it. The only thing that bothered me was that Ted Tonks actually died before the battle, when he was captured. Other than that, this is completely brilliant! Well done! 9/10

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! With regards to Ted Tonks... this is actually a complete mistake on my behalf *blush* I hadn't read DH in well over a year and a half, and in that time COMPLETELY forgot that Ted died *dies* Thanks for pointing that out though- if I ever get around to editting it, I'll maybe see about fixing that :)

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Review #3, by Livingautum Angels Without Names

2nd October 2010:
Thanks for entering the challenge!

I have to admit, I cried. Your characterization was perfect, right along with your storyline.

I loved everything, especially the begging! WELL DONE! The effect you left when you wrote the words that were unsaid, tore me apart. This was such an amazing read. You are an amazing writer. :)

Thank you so much for entering!

Author's Response: Thank you so much- I'm really glad you liked it! The challenge was such an awesome idea, so thank you for giving me the inspiration to write it :D

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Review #4, by Frogprincess Angels Without Names

26th September 2010:
wow... that's so sad...
I absolutely adore reading your writings... you write so beautifully and I find myself stoping and going over the words and phrases again and again, delighted by the way they sound.
the opening bit was particularly good, about his death, and I really liked the parts about Lily and Fred.
great job, as always.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your reviews always make me so happy :D I really enjoyed writing this, though it turned out nothing like I originally planned xD

Thanks for reviewing! *hugs*

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