Wow this is so good! You are an amazing writer, and it chilled me reading it. The only thing that bothered me was that Ted Tonks actually died before the battle, when he was captured. Other than that, this is completely brilliant! Well done! 9/10Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! With regards to Ted Tonks... this is actually a complete mistake on my behalf *blush* I hadn't read DH in well over a year and a half, and in that time COMPLETELY forgot that Ted died *dies* Thanks for pointing that out though- if I ever get around to editting it, I'll maybe see about fixing that :) Report Review
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I have to admit, I cried. Your characterization was perfect, right along with your storyline.
I loved everything, especially the begging! WELL DONE! The effect you left when you wrote the words that were unsaid, tore me apart. This was such an amazing read. You are an amazing writer. :)
Thank you so much for entering!
-LivingautumAuthor's Response: Thank you so much- I'm really glad you liked it! The challenge was such an awesome idea, so thank you for giving me the inspiration to write it :D Report Review
wow... that's so sad...
I absolutely adore reading your writings... you write so beautifully and I find myself stoping and going over the words and phrases again and again, delighted by the way they sound.
the opening bit was particularly good, about his death, and I really liked the parts about Lily and Fred.
great job, as always.Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your reviews always make me so happy :D I really enjoyed writing this, though it turned out nothing like I originally planned xD
Thanks for reviewing! *hugs* Report Review
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