Sorry, my review kind of got cut off half way through there :P
Anyway... please update again soon so I can have some more Javian (James and Vivian) action!!!
10/10
-Emma

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Yay! You updated!
Another brilliant chapter :) and they're together again maybe. You have no idea how happy this makes me :D

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Yay!!! This makes me so happy, I'm so glad to see James and Vi happy again. and I can't wait to find out what the wizarding world thinks when they find out. Please update soon

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AH!
Another great chapter - you are such a good writer. I just have to know what happens now. They have to get back together!
Update quickly please :)
10/10
-Emma

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Loved the latest chapter!

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That was actually incredibly sad, what was said about keeping secrets. Brilliantly written though. Love the story.

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I'm curious as to how Alexa knows about Vivian. And why did Alec and Lily break up?

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She should've asked about Scorpius and who he was dating! -cough-

Brilliant as usual.

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I'm confused...Vivian's nana sells wizarding books in a muggle bookstore? Can she do that?

Oh, and I worked out why the dialogue doesn't seem to flow. You keep starting a new paragraph directly after closing the speech, but it should all be part of the same paragraph, same sentence actually. For example, "sounds like someone was slipped a love potion," Teddy spoke, nudging James again. See how it's all in the same paragraph? If you break it up, then it becomes stilted and difficult to read. You might want to fix that.

It will be interesting to see how James goes about finding out which world Vivian is from :)

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I like this concept, it has the makings a really interesting story. Vivian seems like a very sweet character, I can't wait to read more of her.

There are times when your sentence structure doesn't flow very well, particularly in the dialogue, and there's a few little grammar errors here and there. Keep working at it and I'm sure it will improve.

Also, it's such a little thing, but according to canon, James doesn't have green eyes. In the DH epilogue it says that Albus was the only one on Harry's kids to inherit his and his mother's green eyes.

Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

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He asks her out on a date and then makes quips about the possibility of her being a murderer? Oh, James, you little cutiepie.

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Ha, apparently I was wrong. She doesn't read the prophet. Again, brilliant story. I especially enjoyed her sarcastic comment about how he might have already known her name.
-Steff

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Brilliant introduction. Your story's definitely one of the best I've read in a while. I'm interested to see how they meet. She gets the prophet, so I assume she'll know all about James if she reads it. Not to mention who her father is. Excellent job.
-Steff

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AMAZING! Another awesome chapter :D
I love them together so much, they just have to get back together!
Please please let the letter say the she forgives him!!!
Write another chapter soon so I can know please
Fabulous chapter
10/10
-Emma

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You can't do this, you can't stop there! I must now know how this plays out! Sigh. Really great story by the way :D

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Well crap! James I will love you forever and ever but please listen to Vivian. And Vi, JUST TELL HIM!
1000/1000

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OH MY GOSH, your story is fantastic!
I only just discovered it today and I was hooked, I couldn't stop reading. You have given so much depth to the characters and I feel as though I know them.
You must write another chapter soon. You can't leave it on a cliff-hanger like that!
-Emma

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One of the best fanfiction I've read. Please continue the story. I'm a fan.

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NOOO-OOO-OOO-OOO DO'T BREAK MY HEART PLEASE!! :( DON'T DO THIS! I freaking love this story ^.^ 1000/1000

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Hi!
Found your story today, and I really like it! Its different and fresh compared to most James II stories and its really cool! I really like Vivian her character is fun and easy going.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Update Soon
Jess :)

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I'm pretty much in love with this story! Please don't ever stop writing! Your style is really good and not all over the place which I enjoy greatly. I love Vivian and the character she is. It must be extremely difficult to be a squib. I cant wait till James finds out about her! Something tells me that Alexa knows but wont say anything. How does James not see the connection with Wood as her last name? Anyways I love it and I cant wait for and update! :)

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nice story! seems like it will be interesting. Update!

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OH MY GOOODDD!!! YOU UPDATED!!! ahhh! i am sooo happy right now. i mean it i was like grrr when is she going to update?! and then i see it was updated (yes i no a while ago but i was without internet for a week so...) anyways i was sooo happy and i was like 'YES!!!' and then i read it and i was like ok ok i need more like i NEEEDDD it! do you understand me?! ok hurry and update! before i explode and cause the appocolips (end of the world srry i dont know how to spell!)

hehe ok ill leave you but lets make a deal ya? ok if i keep updating my story and review urs u'll keep updating ur story! ok thats a good deal1 now i leave you with a thought that makes you scratch your head-
shampoo a squirrel and eat a stick of butter cause its all good for ur health!

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Hai there!

SOOO! I like your story pretty much, it's interesting and well written. James is pretty much what I've pictured him to be, and Vivian seems like an awesome character, well done!

I think that you should change the font, though, as it is really difficult to read with such a small letter and all.

Keep up the awesome work!

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woah, loved it! i always thought of what it will be like, a wizard-squib relationship story (i actually started one myself recently, also a jamesoc. i absolutely ADORE james's character :P).
anyways, the first chapter did his job with describing the characters and all really well. well done! (:
oh, and good luck ^^"

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