Woah. I just lost a loved one recently and truthfully, this was perfect. You made me cry. No matter how corny this sounds, i loved the way he says 'the way i see it, you just went home' jeeze, i just started crying again :) this was truly amazing

Author's Response: First of all can I just say I am so sorry for your loss, whoever it was. I have never personally lost someone, so I have to admit I felt like a bit of a phony writing this, but the response has been overwhelmingly good so thank you.

I'm so glad you liked it, but sorry it made you cry! Thank you for such a lovely review XD

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That. Was. Beautiful.
I really don't know what else to say. It was absolutely beautiful. The way he wrote it especially :/ It hurt. It was painful.
It was beautiful. There really is no other way to say it.

Author's Response: Aw, wow, thanks so much. I felt like a bit of a phony writing this, as I've never actaully experienced somebody I know dying, so I wasn't sure if I'd capture the emotions right, but the feedback seems to be quite good. Sorry it was so upsetting though!

Thanks for reviewing, it means the world to me.

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this was really good but sad, it puts Reg in a new light and i like it :)

great job

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm loving all the reviews for this story, I'm glad everyone seems to like it. I know it's a bit depressing, but it was fun to write.

Thanks for reviewing!

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WOW, that was seriously adorable.
loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks! It means a lot to me when people like my stuff.

Thanks for reviewing!

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Wow. Just wow.
10/10

Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! Reviews mean so much to me. 10/10 - that's quite a hefty score! I never get that in maths tests. SO thanks, this really means a lot that people like it.

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I nearly cried at the end. From "that colour was just reserved for you" all the way to "The way I see it, you've just gone home"

Author's Response: Aww, thanks. See you tomorrow.

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Aw, it was so sad and sweet, I loved it! You really deserve first place. Congrats! :)

'DJSevvy

P.S. Isn't stories not supposed to be a letter? How'd you get the staff to approve this?

Author's Response: Thanks! I've never won a challenge before, so it's quite exciting.

I've no idea how this got validated - I guess maybe 'cus it's only a oneshot?

Thanks for reviewing, anyway!

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Hey, I'm ElysiumJayne *grins*
This is amazing. Regulus/Mary is so cute together and the best thing is since we hardly known anything about either of them, things like this can be totally beliveable. Thank you so much for entering my challenge!

x Ely

Author's Response: Thanks! This totally wasn't what I had in mind when I started writing, but this is how it turned out and I'm glad you like it! I'm thinking of writing out their whole story, now, because I've fallen so in love with the characters, but I'm not sure if that would ruin it :/

Thanks for the lovely review!

-InsertWittyCommentHere

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