this was hilarious!!! i loved it soo much!! keep up the great work with your writing :)

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Very funny! Well done:)

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Loved this!! So funny XD

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Haha i love it. If you take out that one swear in the middle and cchange the rating, then more people could read it.

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ilove the story!
u should continue and make snape meet all the potter and weasley clan!!??
wonder wat his reaction to lily would be???

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This is really cleverly written. I loved Albus's characterization, as I would never have thought of him like that. But most of all, I loved Snape! Good to see he was still himself all these years later, even as a portrait!
10/10

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I LOVE LOVE LOVE THIS! *squeeeals like an idiot* Oh this is exactly what I want to happen in the book!!! Exactly!! It's so cute. Snape, angry, hahaha. Oh Snapie. xD

Thanks for this wonderful entertainment.

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I'm really impressed by your ability to write humour. All the characters very nicely interpreted and true to canon. A fantastic read! Cheers!

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LOL, I laughed so much, this is just too cute! Good job, I love it xDD

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bravo on this so in character

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Heyy. Well I stumbled across this story by accident because I was looking at another author's favorite page, and I'm glad I did! That was hilarious! I liked the way Severus just calls him 'The Brat' the whole time.

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I love this! Is that it though :( I want more! Goid job though your a great writer

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This.is.an.absolutely.wonderful.adorable.story.
I love it! Thank you so much for writing this :)

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lolololol I love this story! It was a great idea! Especially all of snapes rambling about not wanting to be a painting lol great job!
I've read the 7th one sooo many times as well, but that's brilliant!

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Awh this was lovely! Funny and cute :3
I like the way you have characterised your Albus (he seems to have some Marauder in him) and your Snape was great too.
Well done overall!

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love love love it! awesome idea!

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Loved it! Brilliant idea for a one-shot. :)

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Great story...loved it dude...write more

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PAHAHA. This was hilarious! I think you got Snape's character down perfectly, and I loved the whole thing - nicely written, realistic (well, as realistic as wizards can be) and just FUNNY.

10/10 and favourited, this made me laugh ^^

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ive read this over and over and over again
pure genius, i wanted to write soemthing like this, but your story's the only one im my head!!
well done!!!

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Haha loved it, amazingly original idea too :)

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I have thoroughly enjoyed this! I too have always wondered about this scenario. I'm so glad to have found and read this! It's fantastic! Love it! Well done!

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Haha, this was hilarious! I love it :D God, I love the snappy, grumpy Snape, and you pictured him fabulously!
As another reviewer pointed out, I have a feeling that Snape and Albus will get a closer relationship over the years, my personal feeling is that Al is going to end up in the Heads office just as often as his brother ;) Keep up the good work :)

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Loved it. I just wish it could have gone on a bit more AFTER Severus found out about Al's middle name.

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I love this! This is absolutely brilliant, I love the snarky, sarcastic characterisation of Snape and you've written the whole thing amazingly well. 10/10!

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