Not bad first chapter. You appear to have Harry, Dudley and Harry's Uncle Vernon as good friends, how did that come about? Going onto chapter 2. 10/10 so far.Author's Response: Vernon's not exactly buddies with Harry, he's there 'cos there nothing really else to do if your a muggle in a death eater utopia. And I always imagined Dudley as regretful towards the way he's acted, more than he's ever mentioned Thanks for the review Report Review
That was a little awesome, I have to say. I love the characters and the story, although it was a little confusing at the beggining, but that was probably just me being blonde :L can't wait for the next installment, jim xAuthor's Response: Thanks for being my first and only review. I'm 3/4s the way done with the next, had a bit of writers block and hectic lifestyle over the past month or so. Eh, I hope its not too confusing -Enjoy, Schiffty Report Review
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