Intriguing indeed. Yes I'd say that you peed Severus well and truly off. Sorry about the delay in this review. I was going through some old reviews and noticed that you had updated with another chapter. A great chapter and a 10/10. And please update soon.
P.S. I have a few more stories up and running if you want to browse through them. And have you heard anything of Jynx?Author's Response: thank you for your review, and it's ok about being tardy!!!*!!!* thank you so much for your 10/10, and as soon as the chapter for Devil's comes through I'll be updating this one.
Yes, I know jynx personally. she insists I make images for her very often. Is she being rude? She does that. :D Wassup? Report Review
its very nice till now.i am waiting you update soon.
AND WOW YOU MAKE AWESOME BANNERS!
i wish i was equally good in that.I am new to hpff and need to learn a lot though.
please write soon i am waiting for your next chap.
keep writing.:):):)Author's Response: Thanks for your review! It's like pulling teeth for people to tell me what they think! Thanks about the banner... *turns red* If you look at some of the other people out there, their banners are SOO much nicer... I'm a noob too.
School is nearly done, so I will be hitting the laptop within a week! I promise to keep writing if you keep reading. Deal?
If you want an image for one of your stories, on my bio it'll say some stuff. read it. ;) Report Review
whoa. intensity. :O seriously though, I love this story so far. I think I favorited it a while ago, but I couldn't remember if I ever read it, so I decided to right now. and its great. :) I like how its about the slytherins(yeah, that's my houseee!) since there aren't too many stories out about them. and aww, montague is soo cute:) but like not really 'cause he actually freaks me out in the hp books, but I like him in this! so that's always good. oh, and this makes draco seem like less of a jerk too, which is nice. haha pedo-ish. ha. FUNNY. that was funny. you joker. ahh. okay. blaah, I'm tired. like I'm literally falling asleep while I'm writing this. that's pretty bad. soo yeah, anyways, this is super good so far:) I really do like it. and I can't wait to read more of it. :DAuthor's Response: haha that was hilarious to read! But seriously, thanks for your reveiw! I know that JKR makes TOO many of the Slytherins big dumb ugly hunks, so I decided to put some real personality into some of them.
Me glad you likey!
Keep reading, I'm trying to write the next chapter as we speak! Report Review
First things first my friend. THIS STORY IS NOT STUPID. There got that out of the way. Now for the review, I like the way that you have Monty being more of a brother and wanting to help her keep the leeches away (Urquart). A very good continuation to the story. Cannot wait to see if Monty does anything to Urquart to keep him away from Silas. Still gets a 10/10 from me. By the way Chapter3 of Daughter of Voldemort should be up very soon so watch out for that, (I name the daughter) and I also have the first chapter of a new story also available. So please read and tell me what you think.
Your fellow Wizard
Magicmugg01Author's Response: Thank you so much for your reveiw! I LOVE reviews!
I guess maybe it's not stupid, but that's a great idea for something I could do with (I love how you call him Monty!) Montague and Urquart. :D Love it :DDD
BTW imma go check out ur story to see if the chapter's up. THANKS! Report Review
According to the start of this chapter you have received 2 reviews. Not bad for a first chapter, it certainly left me wanting to know more. GIVE ME MORE, GIVE ME MORE, (PLEASE?)Author's Response: yay for a review! thank you so much for reading! i know that first chapters are alot of times very boring, and very hard to get reveiws for, so once again THANK YOU! i can submit my next chapter now! Report Review
not bad! (i know that first chapters are always boring, so i am going to give you the benefit of the doubt)
ps - the reason im reading this story is because of this 'Draco/OC' you have in your summary. i expect to be seeing that soon!Author's Response: wow! so many reveiws in a day! i love it!
but down to buisness, thanks for your 'benefit of the doubt!' i promise my next chapter wont be so boring.
ah... Draco/OC. yes, that will be coming in a few chapters, hang in there and you will be satisfied! Report Review
ur rite u do need to control that enter key of yours!
PLEASEPLEASE gimme another chappy!!!Author's Response: yeah... my whole computer hates me... i'll try to work on it, and im glad someone actually finally reveiwed! Report Review
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