that was simply beautiful.Author's Response: aww, thank you! My one-shots don't get very much love. Report Review
Ohmygod that's so sweet! I like how it's an entire story in a oneshot and it doesn't seem like a chapter of a story like many oneshots do.Author's Response: Thank you!! It was written for a competition! I'm so glad that you liked it. It doesn't get very much love, so I'm glad you read it! Report Review
this is really good! i love ALL your stories! write more!Author's Response: Oh, you are so sweet! Thank you so much! I'm going to be writing a lot more when things slow down a little bit. Report Review
A bit short, which i was disappointed with 'cause I was enjoying the read. Love how it ended though.
"The moment I took your hand and realised I never wanted to let go."
How sweet is that! =DAuthor's Response: Yeah, it was only a one-shot for a contest. But I'm glad that you were enjoying it!
And yes, Lily/James is one of my favorite ships! So I wanted it to be really sweet. Report Review
I love James and Lily! Even though I meant what I said about Remus and Lily, they are just perfect for each other!!! I hate Dustin, he's just a little creep!Author's Response: Yes, no one can deny that James and Lily are the best couple ever. And Dustin was supposed to be hated. Glad i did my job as a writer! Report Review
Well here I am with the review for my greek mythology challenge. I hope you enjoyed writing this piece and also I hope you will forgive me for taking so long for reviewing but I was ill. I'malso writing this on my Iphone so excuse the mistakes here in. I loved the fact that Lily Evan's friend did get pissed on her because she choose that guy above them but still tried to cheer her up when she was upset. That Guy really was a bastard he did everything for a great mark. Typically Ravenclaw though I've never seen another writer attribut that character trait to someone. I thought that prince and princess part was a bit to much I mean you can be populair but I'm sure people wouldn't view you as that. That was my critic for you actually. I loved the end especiallythe fact she was looking back. -xoxox- CleopatraaAuthor's Response: I agree the the prince and princess part was a bit overboard, but in the myth they were royal and I wanted to make a bit of a play on that. Thank you so much for this challenge! I enjoyed writing the piece an astronomical amount! Report Review
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