*squeals* aww, that's so nice! Charlie wasn't destined to be a cat lady after all! I do love a happy ending! Roxy, pregnant?! *shocked face* aha, nice twist.. :)
Can't wait to read some more of your stories!xxxAuthor's Response: Thank you! I love a happy ending, too. :) Report Review
Well wow, I don't think a boy of mine has ever been as understanding as that. I'm glad she finally realises she loves Faldo though. I'm also guessing Alice has a little crush on Al? And that Owen likes Roxy?
Anyway, you're an amazing author! Update soon!
Steph,xxAuthor's Response: Ah, I answered to your other review first. Thanks again, anyway. :) Report Review
Absolutely loved the story, I read through it in a night. Keep writing!Author's Response: Thanks a lot! :) Report Review
i liked this ending- it was good cuz all of it wasnt the whole mushy lovey dovey life is perfect ending that you ususally get...cuz it was realistic in a way because they had broken up for a few years...
anyways good chapter- well written and really fun to read (just like the rest of the story)
good jobAuthor's Response: Yeah, I thought they would get a little hurt along the way. It happens. But they still couldn't stay away from each other. Now, isn't that true love? ;) Report Review
great chapter! story is amazing!Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) Report Review
oh gosh amazingly epic chapter full of epicness!!!
another cliffy... WHY?
haha Faldo= so sweetAuthor's Response: Because cliffies feed my soul, muahaha. Just kidding! XD Or I am? ;) Report Review
ah amazing chapter!
so glad she isnt with louis anymore
felt kinda bad for him though...Author's Response: Lol, that makes us two. :D They're just not right for each other. But, yeah, Louis is a good person. He deserves someone who will truly love him. Report Review
ah do not like dora/louis.
great chapter!!Author's Response: That's not odd. :) Thanks! Report Review
oh my gosh its faldo right?! NO! SO AWKWARD IF IT IS
great chapter !!Author's Response: Thank you. Read on. ;) Report Review
AMAZING CHAPTER FROM AN AMAZING STORY!
great plot and fantastic characters!Author's Response: Aww, thank you. (Blushing.) Report Review
ah i love faldo! such a cool character!
it was interesting to see where their dislike for each other began!!
ummm not overly into louis/dora...
anyways good chapterAuthor's Response: Thank you for your kind words again. :) I adore Faldo as well. Report Review
oh i've been meaning to read this story for quite awhile and im so glad that i have!!
oh i simply adore faldo! he makes me laugh
and i quite like the roxy/owen pairing!!
oh and alice is funny!
great story so far!! now please excuse me while i go read the next chapter!!Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! I love Roxy and Owen as well. :) Report Review
I really love this story and I love the new banner! However I think you need to go back and edit for spelling mistakes.Author's Response: Thank you. :) Yeah, I know about the mistakes. I got into it a few months ago, but then real life took over. As soon as I get some free time again, I will go back to it. ;) Report Review
this is one of the cutest relationships i've read about in a harry potter fan fic in a long time
thankyou i loved it :)
maybe a sequal? 10 years later?Author's Response: Aww, thank you. Maybe someday I'll write about them again, we'll see. Never say never. ;) Report Review
I loved it!I love the characters depth and the whole plot of Alice as a Seer.Keep up the good work!:)Author's Response: Thanks a lot. :) Report Review
I have to tell you, faldo is my favorite oc ever. The story was very good and covered a large span of time. I hope you keep writing :)Author's Response: Thank you! :)
I don't have as much time as I used to, but I'm working on two new stories, actually. Hopefully they won't take long. I'd love to finish them completely and then start posting so that the readers don't have to wait as much. I hope you'll like them if you ever come back to read more from me. :) Report Review
my fav fan fiction ever
at first I was like ew cheesy title then after a while I was like aw heck it! And I loved it I'ved read it in 3 hours (consecutive!)Author's Response: Wow, 3 hours? You're fast! That's great. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. :) Report Review
I haven't been on in aaageees, sorry! I've had an exam overload (did somebody say 2 hrs 15 mins for an english exam? Yawn)
I can't wait to hear about this halloween party
If I was there, I would have given Lee/Charlie a cookie, Cookies cheer everyone up.
Toodles!Author's Response: Oh, that must have been a hard exam. :/
Well, I know I love cookies. :) Report Review
One of my personal favourites too!
I'm glad they're finally friends, I could tell that they couldn't stay mad at each other forever.
I love Harry in your story, he makes me smile!
Hmm... What else?
I think your song was pretty good (I can't remember if that was this chapter or last chapter but it was still good)
That's it for now.
I'm going to be quite sad when I reach the end and can't review anymore I think :(Author's Response: Yes! I love this chapter because they finally make peace. :) Thank you!
I know, I was a little sad, too, when I finished the story. Report Review
Dora's Birthday, yay :)
Happy Birthday to you
Happy Birthday to you
Happy Birthday to Dora
Happy Birhtday to you!
*Presents with cake*
Tension with Faldo, we finally see who put that almighty stick up his arse...Author's Response: Lol, your last words amuse me. :) Report Review
She so is going crazy :)
Thanks for clearing up the houses for me, I get it now!
So.. Charlie/Lee=same person?
I think I know who dream guy is but I'm not going to say anything in case I'm wrong
And, Roxy and Owen? What? *is stunned* that was unexpected, good unexpected though!Author's Response: Yes, Lee is Charlie's nickname. :)
The dream guy is dreamy.
And yeah, Roxy and Owen. They're quite the pair. :D Report Review
Does anyone smell sexual tension? I sure do...
Just to clarify what house is everyone in? I'm a bit confused here :S
Be back again tomorrow!
ByeeeAuthor's Response: Well, Dora, Faldo, Al, Scorpius and Charlie are in Ravenclaw. But the boys are a year older. Roxy is in Gryffindor. James and Lily, too, are in Gryffindor. As well is Louis. :) Oh, and Alice is a Gryffindor, too. If you're still confused, tell me. ;) Report Review
Yes! My determination payed off! I got over 1 chapter read today! woop! Ruby:1 Procrastination:0!
Anyway that's enough exclamtion marks for now.
I love this chapter, Neville as a mentor :)
And when I read the toilet bit I was like 'OMG Prophecy!"
I'm glad I got that right otherwise I would have looked leetle bit stupid.
School tomorrow so the reviews might slow down :(
(I always go back to check your replies by the way, they're nice)Author's Response: Neville is made to be a mentor, I think. :) Poor Alice, right? There's no rush, take your time. :) Aww, thank you. I love answering. Report Review
hmmm... Faldo what are you up to then?
I got distracted yesterday :P
I guess I didn't really put two and two together about the bottle incident
Roxy, just... 'nuf said.
Lol at McLaggen
AL'S A PREFECT?Author's Response: Faldo is... well, you'll find out. :P
I heart Roxy. Yes, Al's a prefect. A very bad one, too, lol. I mean... He's always organizing parties. What a horrible prefect. XD Report Review
I was right, I did fall asleep, hence why I'm starting earlier tonight.
God Faldo, get your act together *tuts*
What's the bottle incident? I'm intrigued...
Dudley, a chef? Who'd have thought it (apart from you obviously).
Warning in advance, I imagine that by the end of this story the reviews will all be like 'Another good chapter :)'
But I'll try to continue being original.
I like Roxy, she reminds me of my friendAuthor's Response: The bottle incident is the one in the first chapter, when Dora gets hit in the head with it, lol. At least that's what I think you mean. You're really great for doing this, thank you!
I adore Roxy. ;) Report Review
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