Ron saw the killer? Really? Ah, conspiracies!!! Theories!!! Mysteries!!! I love them! :D
I like the added moments with Hermione and Draco and Harry and Ginny, just normal family-like stuff. It was so sweet.
:O GEORGE! What - what is happening? I... No words. Just George! I need the next chapter now p, I need to know what's happening. :D
Enjoyed this chapter!
Sam.Author's Response: I'm trying to make this realistic (at least a little, lol) and add in the things that they're doing besides all the hardcore stuff. And I love the George part! I had written him in a little a few chapters back and for awhile wanted to bring him back. So even though it's kind of random, I'm going to go that angle, at least for a little bit. I have so many ideas in my head where I want it to go. The next chapter is about half written. I have the body of the chapter written and now I'm just adding in some filler to help it make a little more sense. I'm really excited!
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ohh, there are many hints in this chapter! :O
cant wait for the next one! No faults in this! xxAuthor's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I had a lot of fun with this chapter. And it's so exciting now that I know where I'm going with it. I'm almost finished with the next chapter, so it should be up soon.
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I really hate you I have been crying for an hour because of this .I read 10 chapters last night and was looking forward to reading the rest after school and my mother thinks I'm even stranger now because of this , but it is a very good read but I am now during in sideAuthor's Response: If it makes you feel better, there are moments when I cried while writing this story. This is a true example of when some people describe writing as having a baby. This story is my baby. Its made me laugh, cry, want to throw things, I love it! I'm glad you like it!
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What? It's like the end of the Hobbit when the dragon wakes up! COMPLETELY UNEXPECTED. Report Review
OMG! I STARTED READING THIS, THIS MORNING, I'VE BEEN HELL WITH THIS STORY! i've cried, ( a lot) been happy, angry and annoyed, BUT FINALLY HE IS ALIVE! fudge yea
you dont know how happy this made me! Just make sure it isnt another 2 years before you update!
xxAuthor's Response: I will try not to. I have a couple more chapters posted, and I'm working on it, I promise. I'm trying to keep my writer's block at bay, which is why some of the chapters may be cheesy and kinda dumb, but as long as I keep going, it'll all work out in the end. I have several ideas that I wanna go with and it is just getting to that part. Report Review
I like the story. but it is unrealistic with the timing. a normal pregnancy would take nine months. from he time they were "together" that night up to the exams couldn't possibly have been long enough for her to have her water break unless it was a miscarriage.Author's Response: That was kind of done for story flow purposes, kind of like how on soap operas they age a character for better story lines.
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You're back?! OMG, HELLO!!!
Great first chapter to come back to, I've missed this story. When I saw it, I feared I'd forgotten it as it's been a while, but no, how could I forget? :D
Draco and Scorpius are so adorable together, they're such a cute family and I'm so glad he's back and alive. And Blaise really is a great guy, I love him the more I read him.
Oh, Harry. You should have gone to Hermione from the beginning. :P
Great chapter. Welcome back. I can't wait for more!
Sam.Author's Response: Yes, I'm back! It feels great to be back.
I'm so glad you liked this chapter. I was so worried about it, because for so long it was just there and I couldn't figure out what to do with it. They were so easy to write for at the beginning and then all of the sudden, it wasn't easy anymore. Not to mention there were so many ideas that I toyed with, trying to figure out which was the best. The next chapter is in validation, so hopefully that will be up soon and I'm about halfway through with the chapter after that.
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YESH. my heart has been mended. I actually. love. you. so. damn. much.Author's Response: I'm glad. Now if only I can keep it up :) Report Review
good lord. your writing is fabulous. but I actually might be dying. cuz Draco isn't here. so many emotions. Report Review
I knew it!!
I knew Malfoy wasn't dead!!
I have to say, very nice, twisted, story.=) Report Review
please finish this story!!! im totally addicted to it :) Report Review
I hope you finish your story its awesome wanna know how draco and hermione work out and who is the killerAuthor's Response: I know it's been ages, but finally, I just posted up a new chapter, and I'm working out an outline for the next chapter. Hopefully my writers block is gone and I can get this story finished :) Report Review
please, please, please, please, please update this story! It's my favorite :) Report Review
Aww. Poor Draco, so sad. ): Report Review
Haha Ron is always the one to overreact and punch the wrong person. ;) Good job. Report Review
I love Draco and Hermione pairings. Report Review
Good job again. (: Can't wait to read more. Report Review
I absolutely love the way you're changing Draco's character. Like it's not quite subtle, but some things are. Like he still wants to make retorts, but decides against it. I love it. (: Good work!Author's Response: I had so much fun with that. Because I knew it was totally unrealistic to expect him to completely change, but to do it slowly over time helps to ease him into a much better person. Report Review
Good work! I started reading this awhile ago and then took a break from HPFF and I'm reading it again! Now I remember why I put it on my favorites in the first place. (:Author's Response: I'm glad. I think this is one of my favorite stories that I've ever written, and I promise that one day it will be finished. I just kind of hit a bump with it and its figuring out how to get past that bump. Report Review
I love it! Can't wait to read more!Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! Report Review
I do like it. I much prefer Blaise. He is awesome. :D
I've missed reading this story. I'm so glad you're back! I wonder what's gonna happen now. I'm dying to know who the person/people behind all this is/are. Probably a bad choice of words, but I am. LOL.
See you at the next chapter!
10/10.Author's Response: I like Blaise a lot myself. I think I can make use of his character. I've missed writing it! But I'm so happy to be back, and the next chapter is pretty much written, I just have to type it and post it. I have a few ideas of where it's going. And it's not a bad choice at all!
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This is what i have to say about this story: ajsdurmsowfjkj. In other words, i have no words. It's pure brilliance plain and simple.
And Oh Merlin the movie was awesome! though in the RoR part i was afraid blaise was gonna replace crabbe and then goyle did so i was happyish. it was odd when voldemort hugged draco though. And snape and harry were awesome!
Anyways back to the story. I'm mighty supicous of Blaise, especially with that last line and that he wasn't too surprised Draco was alive.
This as i've mentioned above is brilliant! 10/10Author's Response: Thank you so much! And I have no problem with you talking about the movie. I thought it was great as well. As of this writing, I've seen it 4 times.
I'm definitely going to have fun with Blaise's character. Much more than I would have had with Goyle, I think. Maybe. Hmm, but there's still much more to go! Report Review
LOVE it update soon pls.Author's Response: Thank you! I'm updating very soon. Report Review
Let Me Just start by saying I am so glad you made Draco still Be alive. I can Actually try and give you advice now. I Wasn't so sure a few chapters ago.
I really like this story. And I think you have Two options maybe three.
1) End the story here and write a sequel maybe starting a few year later
2) just end the story here or in the next chapter.
3) You can continue writing this story and make a few more chapter(s) through the perspective of Hermione and Draco Ron Harry and Ginny about life. Solve Daphne's Murder, throw in a Twist, somebody they all trust could have done it. Than Do a Trial for that person. Write a chapter about Askaban for that person etc. What I personally Think you should do, Continue on because there are more possibilities.
Again I really Enjoyed this, It made me Laugh and Cry and Laugh again, it made my heart go out to Draco because he was written so well. If you need any Ideas or suggestions (Anything) feel free to PM me on the Forum's I'm always Happy to Continue reading and reviewing or helping to decide what to do next. All in all it is your story and you can do whatever you want with it, but It was Really good. I can also help you write a summery if you wish, and If you request me in specific Artist on TDA i'd be happy to make you a banner. Report Review
Tear* You killed Draco! Well I'm still enjoying the story even if it will be difficult to continue reading. Report Review
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