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Review #1, by Marauder No five ~Envy~

24th January 2011:
i actually love this especially the ending :) it was amazing :)

Author's Response: Thank you. ^_^ Glad you enjoyed it.

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Review #2, by raznilla ~Envy~

18th January 2011:
I really like this :) you caught Snape's character really well!

Author's Response: Thank you! ^-^

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Review #3, by lily16 ~Envy~

4th January 2011:
Wow, that was really good. This is exactly how I imagined Snape's reaction would be, and the last fews lines were really good. :D

I think Lily and James had more than 2 years together though...they started dating at 17/18 and died at 21, so that's at least 3 years. Not much of a difference though :(

Author's Response: Ahh math I'm not sure how I got 2 years or where I was counting from... I'll be sure to change that for you~ I'm glad you enjoyed it! I had fun writing it really. ^_^

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Review #4, by wizardgirl ~Envy~

15th November 2010:
Great story. I felt like the time frame it was being written in jumped around a little, but it was really sweet.

Author's Response: I realize that, I'm not really sure why I uploaded it to be honest. I have a hard time reading it myself but I thought I'd see what happened if I put words to it.
And thank you~ ^_^

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Review #5, by Canadian_Hogwarts ~Envy~

13th November 2010:
Poor Snape. I loved the last little bit; Snape would definitely still envy James, even years after the Potters died. Great work!

Author's Response: Ahh yes poor Snape. He is very fun to write about though, I'm still not sure if I was fair to him their. And thank you! I had fun writing it, though its a new style for me.

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Review #6, by lilyanne ~Envy~

31st October 2010:
I really really liked it. Great job!

Author's Response: Really? Thank you! Glad to here that.

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