Reading Reviews for Wherever The Road Shall Go
  
3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by ImagineHarmony Wherever the Road Shall Go

18th July 2013:
Hi!

I just loved the beginning part of the story, very creative and fun to see how they were communicating so well even with their hectic schedules and work! That was a cute thing to read, it gave their relationship a lot of potential. I was hoping you would choose another country, something that was different and inspiring but USA was an okay choice, not bad. I liked their travelling and how they cried together, showed that they were in this together no matter what.

I found one mistake in the story: "They stopped at one and Hermione tried to pretend she wasn't eying this one turquoise necklace, but Hermione noticed. " I think you mean 'Harry noticed.'?

But I found the last part... weird and OOC to the earlier parts. I just have so many questions as to: why Harry would cheat when it was certain that he was satisfied and happy with his relationship with hermione? You could have explained that. And also, how did Ginny end up in USA? The last part made the story's message uncomprehendable and I couldn't understand it that well or what you were aiming at? Did you mean to aim at 'Hermione and Harry are always for each other no matter what, if they cheat or cry or have hectic schedules.'?

Overall it was a good story, maybe a bit more description to add that depth to the story, not a bad read. :)

 Report Review

Review #2, by spencefa Wherever the Road Shall Go

23rd May 2011:
Excellant story, very enjoyable to read, nice that you left them as friends

 Report Review

Review #3, by x0xShattered_Dreamsx0x Wherever the Road Shall Go

13th September 2010:
Hallo!
Loved it! Loved it! I really loved it :)

~SD

 Report Review
If this is your story and you wish to respond to reviews, please login