Your story is amazing!! I love the romance between Draco and Hermoine!! So CUTE!! :-)

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You really need to proofread this I didn't understand much of it because either the words were used wrong or you spelled things wrong. You also need to watch when you captialize thing. Names should be capitalized and some were not. Overall the general story is good. Sorry to criticize but it's true.

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brillaint love it.
love hermione and the idea of her being a actress what happens next?
10/10

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LOVED IT WRITE MORE QUICKLY

PLEASEE

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It's a good idea, but your grammar really needs improving. If you would like you could send your next chapter to me and I could correct the grammar for you before you send it off? :)

Eleanor x

Author's Response: Thanks Eleanor, I will keep it in mind.

best

Elegent Lady x

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Hey A... I think your who I think you are! If not im making a complete fool of my self but still. any way this is bril. see you soon

Author's Response: Thanks S.

LOL READ MORE THANKS

XOXO

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I like it so far! It seems really great. (: Waiting for more. Please update soon?!

10/10

Author's Response: Thank u so much glad u like it I will update soon

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Fantastic more please.

Author's Response: Thank u Im so glad u like it, il update soon

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Well, I have to say this is pretty nice.
Keep going ;] loved it. But can't you make it longer?
8/10.

GinTheCalm

Author's Response: Thanks i wanted the 1st chapter short so i could see what people thoguht f it promise i will make the next chapter longer x

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