Chocolate.Woah sorry lost myslef thier for a moment :)
Ok I have one thing to say...this story is so sweet it's so pretty and I love it! good job.
Lizzie-aka romellae from the TDA! :)

Author's Response: oh hai there loff! i'm glad you stopped by XD

and thank you, i'm glad you liked it ;)



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Amazing story. I really like how it was written, with the other thoughts written into the same sentence. Both Harry and Ginny were perfect, their thoughts and moods were exactly right. I especially liked Ginny reading Harry's mail beforehand (that sounded like I'm a creeper of something. I'm not, just so you know.) The line 'you have been reading all his mail from them before he does not that you will ever tell him that because Harry needs to think he is strong and he is, but sometimes he needs to let you be strong for him to ensure he will be given time to heal.' was really powerful. Ginny is such a perfect partner for Harry, going to such lengths to stop him from hurting. Super work. I'm going to go read some more of your writing right now. And yes, I did use super in a sentence.

Author's Response: thank you! i'm so glad you liked it, it means a lot to me ;)

Jayme.

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Nice story. Liked the way it was written.

Author's Response: thank you! i'm so glad you liked it--it was a bit of an experiment, so to know it paid off means a lot(:

Jayme.

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