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Review #1, by liza_potter One Night

22nd January 2011:
First of all, I have to say I admire you for being able to write a story with an AVPM quote in it. I know I probably wouldn't be able to- not without thinking about that particular scene in AVPM, anyways. ;)

The quote slipped in quite nicely as well in the conversation. Good job there! And with so much dialogue, it all seemed very realistic and naturaul.

A totally awesome one-shot! :-)

Author's Response: Thank you so much :D I think I re-watched the scene this was in a couple of times, actually... but it wasn't an easy quote to work with :P But it was still fun.

That's good to hear :) I'm glad it seemed to fit in so naturally.

:D Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for your review!


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Review #2, by alma92 One Night

18th October 2010:
Oh, please, may I translate it on polish and show on polish forum? Of course, I'll give a link to the orginal and sign, that you are the author.

Author's Response: :D Yeah, sure, go ahead. I feel honoured :)
Thanks for reading and reviewing (and translating ^^)!


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Review #3, by hp481516 One Night

15th October 2010:
Great job. I loved all the parts where Quirrell mentioned his "master." The only time that I really feel sympathy for Quirrell is when I watch AVPM but this story made me feel bad for him. I loved the AVPM quote obviously. :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you loved those parts :)
And that's good to hear as well :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!!


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Review #4, by SeverusLove One Night

18th September 2010:
Dear flying_rabbit,

It was a good piece, no grammar/spelling mistakes, the characterization was okay, and so was the flow. It was clever to put in a line like that since it seems so difficult but anyway... But I also think you should have incorporated a bit more of humor there. It was kinda a bit dull. Aside from that, I think my general opinion on the story is that it was good! :) So uhm, thank you for requesting. ^^

Keep Writing to Improve,
SeverusLove

Author's Response: Hello :) Thanks a lot for your review!

Thank you, that's always good to hear :) I'm glad you thought the characterisation and flow were okay. It wasn't easy to put the line in the story, but it was still fun :)
Oh, alright :) I don't really see Quirrell as a... funny, humorous character, so incorporating (a lot of) humor would have been rather difficult, I think. I'm glad you liked it anyway!
Thank you very much for your review, and I definitely will keep writing!


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Review #5, by moonbaby11 One Night

18th September 2010:
I think this was interesting. I liked hwo you incorperated the quote, since it seemed liek a hard quote to work with!

Anyway, I liked the character of Charity. I don't believe that she was ever really in the books much (except for the beginning of DH), but I liked how you portrayed her!

Ha, I loved Quirrel's stuttering! For some reason I kept laughing at it in the beginning. ;)

Overall, this was a nice one-shot, sort of explaining what was going through Quirrel's head during PS. Great idea! I'm glad you asked for a request on this!

Author's Response: Oh, thanks :) That's good to hear. Haha, it wasn't the easiest quote to work with, but it was fun :)

I'm glad you liked Charity's character; so do I. She's really growing on me :P I don't think she was mentioned a lot either, but that's a pretty great thing, I think. Thanks a lot!

Haha, thank you :) It was a little strange to write his stutter, but I'm glad it amused you ;)

Thanks, that's good to hear :) Thank you for your review!


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