2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by The Indian Patriot Hors D'eouvers

24th May 2011:
write more. dont quit plz. i am alwaz wid u

wil u plz allow us to revie while we r nt logged in, plz?

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Review #2, by hpfan0912 Hors D'eouvers

14th September 2010:
great...but they sound 2 little kiddish..i know they r little kids, but still..."mummy made some sweeties?".i like the plot line tho...please continue!

Author's Response: well they're only three. I should know how a three year old talks, I have a cousin of that age. But no hard feelings. :D Thanks!

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